小姜饼人

Gingerbread Man

By Catherine 11/20/2004

The Gingerbread man could not get across the river. First, he picked up a leaf. Next, he put it on the water, and jump on it! Also he across the river! Last he went to a forest.

The Gingerbread man went in the forest and he saw a beautiful Gingerbread house! The fox was so angry. That is how the gingerbread man across the river.

[幅图]: 一轮红日，两只小鸟，两岸各有一棵大树，水上是一片树叶， 树叶上躺了小姜饼人，岸上是一只狐狸，对岸是一个房子，房子在树下。很好的构思。

老师的评语：Excellent ending！