小姜饼人
文章来源: 席琳2005-01-04 07:03:53

Gingerbread Man

By Catherine 11/20/2004

The Gingerbread man could not get across the river. First, he picked up a leaf. Next, he put it on the water, and jump on it! Also he across the river! Last he went to a forest.

The Gingerbread man went in the forest and he saw a beautiful Gingerbread house! The fox was so angry. That is how the gingerbread man across the river.

[幅图]: 一轮红日,两只小鸟,两岸各有一棵大树,水上是一片树叶, 树叶上躺了小姜饼人,岸上是一只狐狸,对岸是一个房子,房子在树下。很好的构思。

老师的评语:Excellent ending!