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小闲的一年级诗作

(2012-06-29 08:35:59) 下一个


小闲去年幼儿园毕业的时候突然诗兴大发,一口气作了“
Graduation is here”、   You are perfect when you are just yourself”、 “I like school”等好几首诗作 (见我的博文《小闲的第一篇诗作》)。如今一年过去,她又作了几首诗,看看有没有进步。


1.  The Zoo

 The zoo is full of animals

A giraffe uses its high neck to reach leaves

The penguin waddles on the ice

The lion roars out loud

The tiger growls in his cage

The polar bear plays with a barrel

The frog jumps and hops

What an exciting place!

I can’t wait to visit again!


2. Pet Store

On a sunny day

I am going to a pet store

I see one singing bird

I see two sleeping kittens

I see three goldfish swimming

I see four hamsters eating

I see five puppies playing

I see six rabbits hopping

I see seven guinea pigs drinking

I see eight turtles walking

I see nine mice running

I see ten frogs jumping

What a Busy Pet Store!


3. Rain

Rain drip drops on the sidewalk

Rain drip drops on the garbage cans

Rain drip drops on the roof

Rain drip drops on the window

Rain drip drops on the tree trunk

Rain drip drops everywhere

What a raining day!


妈妈觉得去年写的是一种情绪,而今年学会了更多的
detail的描述。而且好象她很喜欢用排比句式耶,读起来有一种重复的节奏美。(大言不惭夸自己的娃 

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