小闲去年幼儿园毕业的时候突然诗兴大发,一口气作了“Graduation is here”、 “You are perfect when you are just yourself”、 “I like school”等好几首诗作 (见我的博文《小闲的第一篇诗作》)。如今一年过去,她又作了几首诗,看看有没有进步。
1. The Zoo
The zoo is full of animals
A giraffe uses its high neck to reach leaves
The penguin waddles on the ice
The lion roars out loud
The tiger growls in his cage
The polar bear plays with a barrel
The frog jumps and hops
What an exciting place!
I can’t wait to visit again!
2. Pet Store
On a sunny day
I am going to a pet store
I see one singing bird
I see two sleeping kittens
I see three goldfish swimming
I see four hamsters eating
I see five puppies playing
I see six rabbits hopping
I see seven guinea pigs drinking
I see eight turtles walking
I see nine mice running
I see ten frogs jumping
What a Busy Pet Store!
3. Rain
Rain drip drops on the sidewalk
Rain drip drops on the garbage cans
Rain drip drops on the roof
Rain drip drops on the window
Rain drip drops on the tree trunk
Rain drip drops everywhere!
What a raining day!
妈妈觉得去年写的是一种情绪,而今年学会了更多的detail的描述。而且好象她很喜欢用排比句式耶,读起来有一种重复的节奏美。(大言不惭夸自己的娃 )