英译 忆秦娥【娄山关】

【毛泽东词娄山关英译】忆秦娥【娄山关】

 

 

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西风烈，长空雁叫霜晨月。

霜晨月，马蹄声碎，喇叭声咽。

Wind freeze, in valley; misty n screaming，

Goose flips the shadows, moon-shining,

honking, dawn-breaking, An icy morning.

An icy morning, in early spring; moon was pale, silent, n hiding;

horses sad, trump beats hurry, in distance army, moving.

雄关漫道真如铁，而今迈步从头越。

从头越，苍山如海，残阳如血。

the walls of steel, stands speechless;

swords cold, trembling, yet wordless,

Move, the highest, cloudless; Crossing over

Crossing over, he's scratching, the hills, dark;

greenish, as deep sea; red, n bloody, the ruby-sun,

Young body, it's shooting, Out.

 

 

Friday, March 21, 2008

约翰雷K. Shaw Burlington, Ca.

北美文学社 与诗友 2008 年 春 三月

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• -To be continued

• 一语湖边 johnlakeshore

• Revised Date :Friday, December 28, 2007 8:58:09 AM

• Personal notes, and future reference, only readers discretions advised！
  Readers can reach me at Add: [e-mail] (China) [e-mail] ( International )

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忆秦娥【娄山关】毛泽东一九三五年二月

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一语：闻，3.14 藏汉向突，国际间纷纷纭纭，忆年初观影【投名状】有感，真是：兵戎间，时空飞渡忍无烟. 忍无言，真情如仞，豆萁入宴。隐隐，郁郁，切切，忧忧，翻旧译润之。Then I see the imageries given in English, quite long, and different from Chinese. ( The red highlighted words are the newest )