【苏幕遮】 范仲淹◆北宋 英译

 

 

The azure sky with white clouds，

The earth covered by leaves gold，

The autumn hues join the ripples，

Above which is bright the chill mist.

Mountains reflect the sunset，

In which the sky and water connect.

The fragrant grass is callous，

Yet lies at the setting sun's blindness.

 

The gloomy spirit of hometown
bears in mind with the journey along，

Unless every night,

Decent dreams keep me asleep.

In the bright moon light，

Do not stay alone in a tower high，

Pour the wine on the sadness，

Turn it into tears of lovesickness.

 

【苏幕遮】 范仲淹◆北宋

 

碧云天，黄叶地，
秋色连波，波上寒烟翠。
山映斜阳天接水，
芳草无情，更在斜阳外。

 

黯乡魂，追旅思，
夜夜除非，好梦留人睡。
明月楼高休独倚，
酒入愁肠，化作相思泪。

[李唐]

To Midway:

商籁诗的几个要求：

1）Iambic 抑扬格： 弱 强 弱 强 弱 强 弱 强 弱 强

2）pentameter 五步 是左右脚各迈步一次，一步一音，五步十个音节

3) rhyme ABAB CDCD EFEF GG

4) three stanzas and last 2 lines

写诗的语法和内容得由作者掌握了。
英文诗歌习作: Sonnet 1

I keep the best memory long of you, =》 'me mo ry 是强弱，应该是弱强
Images from past are now still fresh and clear, =》 ' i mages
What you look like right now I do not view,
There is no reason even for me visit there. =》 me -->my


The old wise-man taught us to be good friends,
Remain distance even in a small town; =》 'dis tance
Confucius said that you can not attend,
If places and countries are clearly breaking down. =》12 syllables


How can you please someone when you abused, =》‘some one
Even worse he has never been some regretful; =》12 syllables，re ' gret ful
But I pre-fer not to be any confused, =》11 syllables
I forgive the bad, meanwhile be forget-ful. =》 for 'give -> for 'give 13 syllables -> forget the forgiving


Yea, things better out of sight are out of mind
I think that is my way of being kind. =》being is 1 sylable

[Midway8989]

先生在这里专攻十四行诗有成，在下凑了一首SONNET，如有空，请到伯客指教。Thanks.

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[林贝卡]

李唐，

译得好，谢谢分享。我不时地读到“碧云天，黄叶地，秋色连波，波上寒烟翠。”真美，充满了诗情画美，今天才知道是由北宋范仲淹所作。

刚才去网上查询了相关的演唱和朗诵版本，一并和你分享。

祝你五一节快乐，周末愉快，

Rebecca

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