也来赶鸟事，根据俺的心情，跟哥儿们来对鸟

立哥，苗哥，和其他哥姐们，无意看你们写的文章，不妨也来凑热闹。

谈诗韵，俺不懂，谈打油，略小一二。

俺觉得这首诗很美，有点凄清，伤怀，更多的浪漫，画面感很强，所以根据俺脑里的画面，俺的译作如下。押韵的事，就放过我。我这能是路过打油——打打酱油：

Ornithology in a World of Flux.

It was only a bird call at evening, unidentified,
As I came from the spring with water, across the rocky back-pasture;
But so still I stood sky above was not stiller than sky in pail-water.

Years pass, all places and faces fade, some people have died,
And I stand in a far land, the evening still, and am at last sure
That I miss more that stillness at bird-call than some things
that were to fail later.

 

纷乱世间的鸟类学

 

那是一声夜晚鸟鸣，无从辩清

我来自甘泉，带着我的春水，

穿过乱石的屋后草莽

我定定地站立，水静天却不静

 

经年过去，事逝人非，故人已去

而我却在远方，

孤立寂静夜晚，终于明了

我思鸟鸣空静，

更甚流逝凡尘

 

最后一个字，总觉不押，找不到合适的词代替，就先这么上了。

欢迎指正