翻译唐代诗人王之涣的《登鹳雀楼》，高手尽管指教

练手玩，可惜字词对应在英文翻译时做不到。如白日对黄河，千里对一层。遗憾。

唐代诗人王之涣的《登鹳雀楼》

白日依山尽，
The sun is setting into the mountains,
黄河入海流。
Toward the ocean The Yellow River rushes,
欲穷千里目，
To see as far as a thousand miles,
更上一层楼。
Up another storey he climbs.