孟浩然《春晓》修改稿

《春晓》
Spring Dawn

孟浩然 （唐）
By Meng Hao-Ran (Tang Dynasty)

翻译： 忒绿


春眠不觉晓，
In the spring dawn I was sleeping sound,

处处闻啼鸟。
Waked up by the birds chirping around.

夜来风雨声，
Blame it on the wind and rain last night

花落知多少。
That countless flowers dropped on the ground.

(每句9个音节；尾韵AABA）

 

Version 2:

春眠不觉晓，
This spring dawn I was sleeping sound,

处处闻啼鸟。
Woke up with bird calls all around.

夜来风雨声，
Came the wind and rain in the night,

花落知多少。
Countless flowers dropped to the ground.

(注：尾韵押 aaba /ound/; 8 syllables each sentence.)