:::【我想要】--参考影云译稿

【我想要】

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让你握住
我的笔
书写一行
横贯东西的赞美
:但愿:
灵感
永不枯竭
...


夏季的风
低语
寻找着
失去音讯的
老友
...
尽管海水
会在瞬间
洗去
沙滩上的足迹
...
我想要
将文字
装进你的枪膛
瞄准
那个脆弱的
心肠
!
渴望
与爱
却如此
美丽倔强
！
哦
沉默大地上的
流星
我想要
在你流火的
羽翅上
唱一首
人性
之
歌
!
!
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作舟

[未夕]

谢谢各位！Enjoy the World Cup!

我一记劲射， 连人带球应声入网！ 狂喜， 欢呼， 爽！
。。。。。。
等一等 。。。什仫？进的是自己的大门？

[~&~]

Mermaid: "...but I wish Germany could win the cup... a dream... hope it come to true)))!!!"

Really??

I like French team too....

Have fun watching the game!!!!

[~&~]

我想要
将生命
传进你的心脏
射向
那个严防的
白网
!
:))

very creative, wx!!!!
happy World Cup!!! make sure to take naps during the day :)
cheers!!!

[地中海人鱼]

wooow, again touched by this beautiful poem! also like wei xi's version a lot! interesting!

I am now watching the game between France and switzland. French team is always my favourate, but I wish Germany could win the cup... a dream... hope it come to true)))!!!

[y.y.]

hahahaha, wx's re-engineered piece is full of fun !!!


:)

[未夕]

很流畅，谢谢！问好！

re-engineering 一下，

【我想要】
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让你随着
我的脚
挥洒一弧
飞越中场的悠扬
:但愿:
激情
永不枯竭
...
夏季的风
迷茫
寻找着
失去踪迹的
足球
...
尽管敌队
会在瞬间
破坏
不止息的冲击
...
我想要
将生命
传进你的心脏
射向
那个严防的
白网
!
渴望
与爱
却如此
痴醉顽强
！
哦
沸腾巨蛋里的
草场
我想要
在你墨绿的
旷野上
吼一首
青春
之
歌

[y.y.]

yes! me too when i was reading the lyrical voice of Czecholslovakia . . . there, poetry is regarded as a normal, everyday activity . . .poets' names are household words. . . ! how beautifully art is interwined into life! - - -poetism . . .

[作舟诗集]

do "Americans" still read poetry???

:))

some years ago, i was surprised [but not surprised] to learn that poetry is still in every fibre of Iranian culture....people speak with poetic language, talk about poets/poetry in households, teahouses, etc....

[y.y.]

should be.

latin america has so many great poets as well as soccer players. . .

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funny thing is that "perhaps fifty times as many as books of poetry are bought by Czechs as by Americans."

[作舟诗集]

thanx to your version as well!!!

cheers!!!

[Cheers to Mexican Team too!!!]

---hope there are some soccer fans who also read poetry :)

[y.y.]

非常喜爱你的翻译！美！