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標點‘福’號 (图)

(2006-03-30 16:18:41) 下一个

標點‘福’號

Alone

                 ^^^^alone

on the heaving chest

of night, you say: (. . . & #@ . . .!!

'. . .') !!! (:) . . . me, pleeeeeeeeeeeese!!

i reply: . . . ***!! . . . (...!!...)

Bones! Magnets! Stars!

A kissingly kiss (!)

Smell your sky, eat

your . . . (!) ~~~~ #@!!

Motuhfire . . . fire in the groin . . .

wordfire . . . fish snake . . . freer

!#@**!!! & #@**!!

There

         ^^^^ there

Am almost there

with you . . . :you

i can kiss but not touch

to who i can confess

but hardly reach

------!------: )(:-------!

My body : Six Air

Lavender, trembling dandelion

Six elements between

you & here

:::::::::::::::

The rhythm of your joy

the music of my desire

!!------De-Sire!------!!

Proudly . . . loudly . . .

Self----lessly----de-

sire humanly desire, some small fire

burning you thru me

my flower, goddess

dove bleeding milk

walking on your palms

comma? period? colon?

Question mark?

or just . . . ???

. . . opalescent

i indulge in tears

in your devine curve

round farm, word horde

wild geese crying

. . . smiling . . . crying

. . . screaming . . .

!!!!!!!!

smiling

crying

dew-filled

sounding

luv

!!

*

*

z

z

 

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影云 2006-03-30 23:07:52 回复 悄悄话 嗯，此猴与彼兔是同一个村庄来的，所以尾巴不太长：)

好消息，文学城的发贴功能恢复了，没有时间限制了：)
律周 2006-03-30 22:59:44 回复 悄悄话 猴子还有尾巴,就是短点.
y.y. 2006-03-30 22:46:08 回复 悄悄话 ugly . . . a monkey blown by the wind . . .;(
影云 2006-03-30 22:44:47 回复 悄悄话


) ( @@ ) (
 ).(^^). (

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     {.}

      ~-!-~
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  O O
影云 2006-03-30 22:11:33 回复 悄悄话 the monkey face is vivid!let me work on the body ;)

hi to lz;)
作舟诗集 2006-03-30 21:58:46 回复 悄悄话 诗 = 快乐发条!
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hi to LZ!!
律周 2006-03-30 21:41:20 回复 悄悄话 一组快乐发条.
~&~ 2006-03-30 20:27:07 回复 悄悄话 ( @@ )
.(^^).


can you add a body to the monkey??

:))
y.y. 2006-03-30 20:10:04 回复 悄悄话 .)(.
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no, that;s scary :)
surprise!!!:)
影云 2006-03-30 20:09:23 回复 悄悄话 .)(.
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surprise!!!:)
~&~ 2006-03-30 19:30:34 回复 悄悄话 yy:

your new id looks like a face closing eyes
& smiling & dreaming
& mediating
too. . .
:)

[yep! that's how i like it :)]

影云 2006-03-30 19:26:32 回复 悄悄话 yes!!! a river to cross!!!

your new id looks like a face closing eyes
& smiling & dreaming
& mediating
too. . .
:)
~&~ 2006-03-30 18:46:33 回复 悄悄话 well said!!!

wORds R bRidges ... helPing US croSS the riveR....

....


~&~ [my new alternative ID:)
影云 2006-03-30 18:29:03 回复 悄悄话 here, you have really animated words)
with your Spirits
and iMagination . . .

someday, words can go away (they will
that's a destiny . . .all mediums
are just mediums . . .)
. . .but . . .
spirits and imagination . . staying
stretching, expanding
& reaching .
. .
.


:)
LTG 2006-03-30 18:08:45 回复 悄悄话 wish i could write a poem without

abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxz...

:)))
影云 2006-03-30 18:00:18 回复 悄悄话 hahahahaha, full of fun . . .cannot help laughing :)

here, you have really ANIMATED words!!!

love it!!!
LTG 2006-03-30 17:41:52 回复 悄悄话 !e!x!h!a!u!s!t!e!d!

???????????????????

*******************

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:))))

Don't work too hard!!

~&~
影云 2006-03-30 17:18:37 回复 悄悄话 ooooops:)

mores words coming:
~s~w~e~a~t~y~
!e!x!h!a!u!s!t!e!d!
yayayaya
.
.
.
>c>o>n>t>e>n>t>(: i o
. . .
. . .
. .
.
.
hulala . . .
LTG 2006-03-30 17:05:15 回复 悄悄话 green +

tea

~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~
~~~~
~~~
~~
~
for all

of you

!!

cheers!!

sounds

to drink!!!

:)
知凡 2006-03-30 16:48:07 回复 悄悄话 "没有艺术的创造力不是“创造！”

艺术就是要打破看不见的束缚！包括旧的艺术形式。

自由，是非常复杂的概念。

艺术里的自由是美好的体现。"

用 POET 的话说 POET 的诗，

投入地读一读。。。

speechless...
影云 2006-03-30 16:41:58 回复 悄悄话 visual!!!
love the sounds of the poem!!!
as if words (: so heart-felt
are beating with hearts
yearning, moaning,
& burning
with
desire

b->e->a->u->
t->i->
f->u------>l - - ->
:)
...
..
.


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