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变化
一片红叶落在了绿色的草地上
她捡起来
看了很久
又放了回去
仿佛什么都没有发生
若是从前
她会把红叶带回家
放进她的收藏夹
因为她的变化
这世界发生了看不见的变化
Change
A red leaf fell onto the green grass
She picked it up
looked at it for a long time
put it back
as if nothing had happened
Had it been before
she would have taken the red leaf home
placed it in her collection folder
Because of her change
the world has changed invisibly
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Sen99 - Powerful idea of change in a few lines, you have a voice.
PoeticRockHound - This poem is so insightful. One small change in us can mean big differences for those around us. I love "the world has changed invisibly." No one might ever know the reason but something has shifted. I will be thinking about this one for a long time.
Ted W. Johnson - We perceive things differently after we grow and mature. I love the subtle message of this poem. Inspiring.
RamachandranRajasekhar - This poem is a fascinatingly beautiful and enjoyable composition. The descriptive narrative flows smoothly and adds clarity to the imagery. Good work!