CBA7的心灵港湾

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Piano

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black keys
white keys
touched by
moving fingers that
connected with
a singing heart
metal pedals
kissed by
nodding feet

the sound of music
dancing and flowing in
keys
pedals
fingers
feet
ears
eyes
hair
breaths
air
reaching the hearts
that are listening

Comments from Allpoetry:
Emeline Moche - Your poem is short but so moving, the short words in the second stanzas feel like music!

brandon- - such an incredible write. the flow and imagery were remarkable. thank you for this tight share.

kaye - A lovely write selected for fpp recognition. Wonderful musicality to this.

相关链接：Piano - CBA7发表于 美语世界 - 论坛 | 文学城 (wenxuecity.com)

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CBA7 2023-11-30 08:05:46 回复 悄悄话 这首诗于2023年11月29日被选上了Allpoetry的首页（Front Page Picks, FPP）。
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CBA7 2023-09-26 19:21:13 回复 悄悄话 回复 '可能成功的P' 的评论 : P君的留言像P君一样灵动可爱 ：）谢谢。

CBA7 2023-09-26 19:19:38 回复 悄悄话 回复 '菲儿天地' 的评论 : Thank you for reading and commenting.

可能成功的P 2023-09-26 11:49:14 回复 悄悄话 琴键般跳跃的字词
菲儿天地 2023-09-26 08:23:52 回复 悄悄话 “the short words in the second stanzas feel like music!” !

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