烟圈儿 （二）

烟圈儿 （二）

一个夜色重叠着另一个夜色

烟头忽亮忽暗的信号

变的捉摸不定

  

一个男人的叹息

被烟圈儿锁在黑暗里

  

他说

我啥也没有了

。。。

别跟着我了

  

一个女人柔软的长发

一个令人窒息的体温

[oneline]

This one is better than the first one.
Subtle yet deeper. This style is more powerful!

I don't think you should post there, they will not understand
and they may misjudge you as a person.

Just my view.

Keep going, this is a form of creation of art with a few words.