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Accidental Find

(2014-01-05 20:49:26) 下一个

Finding the music of
message in a bottle
must be just as exciting
as find a real message in a bottle by the beach
as we imagine in our future life
A poem might be too much
for a message floating in the sea
for hundreds of years
perhaps just the 3 L words
live, love and laugh
and leave the rest
forever after


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nuts000 2014-01-06 10:25:22 回复 悄悄话 这首很不错，好像填词功力大增 : )
细豆荚 2014-01-06 10:14:13 回复 悄悄话 南乡子。 雪痕

一夜雪飘东，白色苍苍雁迹空，溪饮寒冰心向远，忡忡，化作晶莹诗句丛。

晨起雾云瞳，喜见留痕梦语中，雪影飘飘书厚意，融融，一片关怀入酒浓。

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