F1.3.5-7 Morns like these - we parted -

F1.3.5-7 (Fascicle one Sheet three Stanza 5-7）

From Emily Dickinson’s Poems As She Preserved Them. Edited by Christine Miller

Morns like these - we parted -
Noons like these - she rose -
Fluttering first - then firmer
To her fair response.

这样的清晨- 我们永别 -
这样的中午 - 她升天了 -
先飘忽 - 后坚定地
做出她的决定 -


Never did she lisp it -
It was not for me -
She - was mute from transport -
I - from agony -

她一点都不含糊其诃 -
但那不是为我 -
她 - 于天途中保持缄默 -
我 - 因为痛苦欲言无声 -


Till - the evening nearing
One the curtains drew -
Quick! A sharper rustling!
And this linnet flew!

一直 - 挨近晚上
窗帘拉来了-
快！ 一阵悉索！
这只红雀飞走了！

[nuts000]

谢谢，那就改一下

[寒芯]

赞一个！可以提个小建议吗？
她-于天途中保持缄默，
我-因为痛苦沉默无言。