A Pretty Night

A pretty night without stars
but we have snowy stars
on the ground

A pretty night without moon
but you are my snowy moon
in the dream

A pretty night with snowy stream
melted in your heart
and the memory froze it hard

A pretty night with sizzling flame
lights up the memory
repainting the ashes with those youthful lyrics
I still have you in my arms
at times
and forever in times

[nuts000]

谢谢腾雾来访和勉励，互相学习了

什么都敢写:））可谈不上都精通。真情各异，谈不上指点的:）

[腾雾]

很美的诗。看来雪夜给您带来很多创作灵感。从古诗到自由诗再到英文诗，还有小说，无一不精通。很?佩。以后請多指点。

诗词加音乐很美妙。谢谢分享。