如梦令

风丽

同济街头踱步，
飞盼粉花深处，
春雨索秋波，
引来相思无数。
留步，留步，
轻叹时光飞速。

I took a stroll along a small Tongji road
perfume of fragrant flowers flowed
that a beauty's eyes the spring rain sought
many fond memories of love brought
I paused, looked at the rainbow new
and sighed, wishing time had paused too

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如梦令第二版


风丽 (曲未平修改)

同济园中踱步，
顾盼梨花深处，
春雨索秋波，
引来相思无数。
留步，留步，
轻叹时光飞速。

On Tongji campus I took a stroll
My gaze pear flowers on the sides stole
that a beauty's eyes the spring rain sought
many fond memories of love brought
I paused, and so did the rainbow new
I sighed, wishing time had paused too


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