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if i live

closely enough

i can learn

something new

in each song

. . .

if i sing

like that

bird in the tree

i can learn

something new

about love

each day

. . .

if i can

keep

going at

it

i might find

something

new about

you

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[作舟诗集]

影云, 别说自己"卖瓜," “幺喝”还是需要地！
：））

[y.y.]

“老泰”值得一读，还是“米勒爷”的“偶像呢：)
尽管人们说他过时了，那是因为很多人用情诗的角度来读 。。。实际上它们是灵性
的诗篇。。。说实话，读者还得有一定的精神境界[呀，不是影婆卖瓜了吗]

:)

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没怎么读过"老泰"的东西.....
但,你让我感到荣幸了:)-----------谢谢

[y.y.]

in 吉檀珈历 里的诗篇。。。

[y.y.]

其实这首诗歌，让我觉得很有泰戈尔的诗的心境。。。尤其在里的诗篇。。。

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影云,你说的极是!!
你阅读的角度很有"营养":)

[y.y.]

what exists in the poem is timeless

listening:
singing:
searching:
loving:
. . .

"something new" is part of being and has always been there
we open ourselves, and then open a window to see it, feel it . . .

i like the “internal accumulation” of feelings in the poem . . .leading to You . . . of course, this You is more than the you in how-are-you. . .

[作舟诗集]

hi yy::::::::::::::
you can read "timelessness" out of that???
:)

[y.y.]

timeless . . .

:)

[作舟诗集]

hi::::zf:::::::thanx:::::::

[z.f.]

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something new...