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会跳舞的眼泪[英文]

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TEARS THAT CAN DANCE

The tears that can dance

In Yesterday’s memory

Deeply buried inside

Tomorrow’s death 

Darkness    :

Time’s dearest rose    :

Can break the coldest

Heart at-the-first-secret-glance 

The pain happily Free of

Philosophizing hands---

Truth as much as lies!

It belongs to no one! 

The tears can dance

To whatever music

Played on those soft

Simmering—Quivering--Lips

. . .

:: z.z. 2006

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未夕 2006-05-14 10:09:49 回复 悄悄话 yy "我觉得中文写起来很美，尤其是繁体字"
对的。汉字简化后，很多字的原意从字形上已看不出来了。呜呜！
汉字电脑输入方式尚需改良。希望能推广语音识别等更智能化方式。
当然，写诗不受输入速度限制 :)
y.y. 2006-05-13 10:12:11 回复 悄悄话 “是否将发明汉字的老祖宗也拉来适当地批一批？”

真的？ 我觉得中文写起来很美，尤其是繁体字：)
未夕 2006-05-12 22:10:49 回复 悄悄话 "未夕=wx000???" yes!
"Nice ID!!!!" 谢谢！

早就想申请中文ID, 可惜我输入中文的速度太慢。
是否将发明汉字的老祖宗也拉来适当地批一批？
作舟诗集 2006-05-12 19:09:41 回复 悄悄话 未夕=wx000???
Nice ID!!!! :)
白酒,Saki,beer,伏特加.....!!相见恨晚哪！:))
未夕 2006-05-12 18:59:44 回复 悄悄话 zz "sounds like wx000 can drink a lot" 哈哈，好汉不提当年“勇“。五瓶酒，一人一瓶, for zz, yy, zf, lz and wx。如果白酒受不了，可以要Saki 或 beer。sd, 鱼儿等若来迟了，则只有伏特加恭候 … drink bear ...together...with...tear...

Cheers!!!


作舟诗集 2006-05-12 17:40:37 回复 悄悄话 LZ: 我试着把她背诵出来，有很活跃的韵律。
Hi, LZ, 背诵 is a really good way to learn for me too....!!

YY, really enjoy your translation!!! good control of words, rhythm!!!!
cheers!!!
....
sounds like wx000 can drink a lot.....:)

律周 2006-05-12 16:15:08 回复 悄悄话 谁能告诉我在美国出版中文书籍的出版社？
谢谢。
y.y. 2006-05-12 00:10:12 回复 悄悄话 会跳舞的眼泪

昨日记忆里
会跳舞的眼泪
深埋于
明日的死亡

黑暗：
时间亲密无间的玫瑰：
能以最初--- 那秘密的--- 一瞥
令最冷酷的心碎裂

痛苦欢快地免于
哲学化的手 - - -
真实与谎言一样！
不属於任何人！

在任何柔软
情感郁积- - -颤抖的唇上
奏起的音乐
眼泪都可以随之
而舞
未夕 2006-05-11 08:16:06 回复 悄悄话 wx000: "pain happily"! 老板，再上五瓶酒！！!

律周 2006-05-11 04:16:16 回复 悄悄话 我试着把她背诵出来，有很活跃的韵律。
作舟诗集 2006-05-10 16:52:00 回复 悄悄话 thanks guys!!!

zf, sometimes your own words are just as good as others'...

yy, your feeling toward the poem is also powerful....

cheers!
z.f. 2006-05-10 16:01:28 回复 悄悄话 the reason of "a discerning Eye":

"clear and sweet is my soul....and clear and sweet is all that is not my soul.

lack one lacks both....and the unseen is proved by the seen,
Till that becomes unseen and receives proof in its turn."
(W.W.)

I can't control

my thinking

//I think I can//


~o~
y.y. 2006-05-10 15:56:51 回复 悄悄话 非常喜爱这首诗歌！！！尤其是这一节

Darkness :
Time’s dearest rose :
Can break the coldest
Heart at-the-first-secret-glance

极为的美！视觉上的美，心灵的震撼。。。黑暗：时间最亲近的玫瑰。。。丝毫也
不设防。。。一种既无期望，也无失望，于平淡与真实但深邃的眼神里所流露出来
的人性之光。。。
作舟诗集 2006-05-10 15:51:19 回复 悄悄话 you are so welcome, zf!!
z.f. 2006-05-10 15:02:31 回复 悄悄话 LOVE IT!!!!!!

What a discerning Eye!!!!! (attention: I am using one eye here...)

I respect what you express here totally...

"From then on

All of my life

I have been searching

for the unveiled face

of truth"

understood!!!

thanks for your generous sharing always...
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