one day (图)

one day

i was holding

my penis

&

come to understand

the whole scope of

post-modernism

 

+

z z

 

note: Some iguanas have a third eye that helps regulate how long they expose themselves to the sun (flash credit: fUSION).

[z.z.]

行为艺术 :))))

not really ... i didn't "perform" it to an audience ...

haha.....u funny!!

[地中海人鱼]

行为艺术。。。

[作舟诗集]

wx000,

glad a male friend can translate a poem like this ... :)))

like your variation too!

you are funny!!!!

zf,

路在脚下。。。冲啊。。。:))


~&~

[z.f.]

灵与肉。。。(主义多多，哪个主义“WHOLE”？？？)

这首诗的WHOLE BODY:

灵 （picture/flash）

肉 (poem)

足 (note)

路在脚下。。。冲啊。。。:))

(我在想如果每个人都成了灵与肉的整体，这个世界岂不有可能变共产主义?????? 到时岂不是没了幽默。。。。。。

[wx000]

trying to translate it

一天
我正握着
我的阴茎
猛然
对后现代主义
大澈大悟

[z.f.]

laugh and think and laugh again ...

艺术/诗歌让人感觉愉快感觉痛快，还因为它的反叛精神。。。这首诗里的痛快之感在于反叛。。。

[wx000]

haha.. 模仿一下

one day
i was holding my pink slip
&
come to understand
the whole scope of
capitalism

@ @
^

[z.f.]

"real humor, i think, has wisdom in it besides what makes people laugh and think and laugh again ..."

I AGREE!!!!!

艺术/诗歌在我的心中很美很纯净很享受。。。不然我为什么要读诗歌？？？

这首诗，如果没读 note，没有因为配图和note 里的提示让我想起“觉”和“觉”里的另一副插图的话，我不会觉得真幽默。。。

laugh and think and laugh again ...

[z.z.]

幽默 and 搞笑 are two different things, i think....

the word "搞" has very negative connotations, to me at least....think about it ... it shows the casual, so-so quality of the action as well as the result...

its equivalent in English might be "get" ... get this, get that, etc..

real humor, i think, has wisdom in it besides what makes people laugh and think and laugh again ...

[z.f.]

但是真正的幽默诗应该是最难的吧。。。诗人提倡“幽默”诗？？？

“one of the things lacking in modern Chinese poetry is humor。。。 ”很正常吧，诗歌是否也搞笑？对不起，我对待诗歌的态度是不是太严肃了点儿。。。请指正。。。

I read the WHOLE BODY of the poem (the picture/flash, the words and the note...)

读完觉得很好笑很好笑。。。

期待你写首诗，能让咱们直勾勾地瞧一瞧。。。:)

好难啊。。。:(

:)

:(

::

:))

happy friday!!!

[z.z.]

i know friends on here all have a good sense of humor ...

laugh, laugh whenever you can ....!!!

one of the things lacking in modern Chinese poetry is humor, i think ....

many of our poets are wrapped up too tight, or too fragile to withstand criticism ....

[z.f.]

good sense of HUMOR

no wonder you have such a good TASTE

eat well!!!

remind me the art by alex grey you posted in your article "觉" ...

a human being has more than one thousand eyes...

IT is always there...

cannot help laughing:))))))))))))

[y.y.]

hahahaha :) you're in!!!

[z.z.]

:))))

i am all for a woman's rights to attack any ism !!!!!

[y.y.]

love it!!!

for fun :)


Someday

I was naked
in the morning sun

&

seeing the scars
on my body
left by surrealism

: indeed surrealism "enjoys" "dissecting" woman body :)