Holding dreams in rocking chair (图)

Holding dreams in rocking chair

Sun bleeds on your dress

Books smiling wetly

Whose tears on

Time's dagger

 

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!

 

[z.f.]

adios!

ciao!

take care!!

[z.z.]

dodo?!?!?!?

:)))

adios!

[地中海人鱼]

Bravo, How do you know that?

all the best wishes to all of you! dodo, ciao!

[y.y.]

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is this what you want to display?:)

[z.z.]

jaaa?

zzzfff??

is that French???

"我的电脑是个好宝贝"

:)))

美人鱼, how's everything??

glad to see you back!!!

~&~

[地中海人鱼]

~&~ ~&~
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jaaa zzzfff, very special aura spreading from all the poems...

[z.z.]

大家一起爱诗歌，好开心，好开心。。。:)))

!!!!!

that's what i need/want to say....

reading your translations make me realize how much poetics inside each of you!!

bravo!!!

cheerio!!!

~&~

[知凡]

美人鱼,你说的"华美"我想是说的诗中的"气"自华,是吗...

"意象鲜明强烈" 我同意...而作舟最近的几首新诗,矜持尽化,形迹超迈,而"气"依然自华, 某种"无形"似水流淌...

[y.y.]

在摇椅里紧守着梦
你的裙子上有太阳的血迹
书本湿湿地微笑
时间的利刃上
挂着谁的
泪滴
？

[play :)]

[知凡]

“触目惊心的华美，意象鲜明强烈”

美人鱼，你说得更是，你是诗人，比我更了解。。。不是好话，是直觉是感觉，我赞美诗歌！！！

好开心大家一起爱诗歌，好开心，好开心。。。:)))

[地中海人鱼]

在摇晃的椅中，握着梦
阳光的血滴溅于华裳
书页湿湿地笑
那是谁的泪水
飞在时光的
短剑之上


知凡好话都说尽了，再加两句。触目惊心的华美，意象鲜明强烈。相信所有读者读了会有所感悟。

我的电脑是个好宝贝。

[by水滴]

I pictured an aged person...
bathed by the setting sun...
reminisce.........

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:))))

[知凡]

忘了说，还有两个小配图在旋转。。。甚是意蕴迷人。。。:)

[知凡]

握着梦 摇晃的椅
阳光滴血于你的衣衫
书籍湿润地笑着
谁的眼泪飞在
时间的短剑
？
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!

[非常非常精美的小诗，画面感强，气惯其中，一戛即止，效果惊心。。。亦有理趣。。。文字及标点和配图，造型优美魅力非凡:))

起始如波似浪~~~~~~~ 尾收“Time's dagger”〉〉〉

余音：

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[影云]

mmm, your friend, realism 的干活?:)

very nice painting . . . on my mind . . .:)

[作舟诗集]

that's exactly what he said ....except he doesn't have a good grasp on surrealism ....

:))

[影云]

surreal . . .:)

[作舟诗集]

eidolon [??]

i tested this poem on my friend [non-poet] abd he thought it was weird :))

i trust your guys' taste more, i guess ...

cheers!!

[z.f.]

精美惊心。。。

[作舟诗集]

u r

soo

kind

!!!!

:)

[律周]

eidolon.
在思想的精灵.

[影云]

love it so much . . .!!! all of them . ..