NAKED ROSE (图)

NAKED ROSE

Nothing can hide

Your pure moon

Light --- transparent

Blood singing

The ancient 

Love song

You blossom

In every field

In a man’s heart

You lay with a nightly

Wish and wake deep

In earth’s longing

Maybe that is love

So simple, so sunny

With a spring

Breeze singing

The happy notes

Untranslatable

To human ears

+

z.z. 2006

[painting: levent akayli]

[by水滴]

"s.d. has a belligerent nature under her singing friendliness.."

ZZ, you do have a sense of humor!!! hahaha:)))) I can't stop laughing..:))))

[z.z.]

i can tell that s.d. has a belligerent nature under her singing friendliness...
:)))
i don't really remember what "fights" are you talking about....i have a bad memory regarding those things....
well, do not worry.....i knew i was not going to win before we "fought"...
zf, thank you for speaking the truth!!! :)

[z.f.]

xixi...SD:), I am not making excuse for anyone... but I really like beautiful insights, vital and universal truths... and the beauty of art/poetry...

of course you could win... if you think you win by yourself...:)

I am always a loser because "win" is not one of my vocabularies...you know that I like "LaoZi"'s 5000 words...i remember you like those words too...by 5000 words, I am discovering so many beautiful things...

cheers!!!

[by水滴]

:))))

xixi.. ZF, you can always discover the profound meanings in ZZ's poem and make excuse for him. No wonder that I couldn't win! :)))))

[z.f.]

SD,

i like your "fight"... :)

我当时好生佩叹的是你的SPIRIT... but be honest with you, ZZ is not "LaiPi"...after studying his poetry, I find that I am so naive... :)

have a nice day!!

[by水滴]

:))))))

ZF: You have such a good memory!

It was a good old time and a really good "fight". I enjoyed the fight. ZZ was so mad, lost his temper and called "ShiNan"to help him. I didn't even know who he was....:)))) btw. Where is he now? Does ZZ know?

When "fight", ZZ is a guy who loved to "LaiPi". :)))))

Wish I would have chance to fight again.:)))

[z.f.]

zz: 知凡, U R such a trouble-maker!!

trouble-maker?

but I was told I was on the right track yesterday...:)))

no??

敬爱的作老师，学生这就去好生生地啃啃 W.W.:))


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

SD，希望我能代替你让ZZ"怒发冲冠":)))

曾记否。。。

ZZ: "我也觉得寡不敌众，竟没有男同胞来帮我！！！"
...

ZZ: 石南，上！！

石南: 好！！！冲锋陷阵了！！！
...

SD: "你以为我会怕你们二个男的打我一个么？ :))" (what a lovely girl in my eyes:))
...

石南: 亲爱的您.......

:)))))))))))))))))))

SD，我当时好生佩叹你的SPIRIT.... :)) 拱手示敬。。。:)))

...

cheers!!! friends...

[地中海人鱼]

秋菱，我看到你了，那时，我问好呀，可惜你没看见。你是第一个在那儿留言的，黄衫儿是第二个。大家就在这儿见面吧！

[z.z.]

怒放
在每个人的心田
你满载夜的期盼
入眠 醒来浸饱了
泥土的 渴望

也许 那就是爱
如此简单，如此阳光
春风哼着小曲
欢快的音符
我们竟然无法
翻译传唱

秋菱, well-done!! it reads very musical....very subtle rhymes!!!

水滴: "俺说话受一点限制（ＺＺ又该怒发冲冠了），唱歌自由些。呵呵。"

You know why I am not "怒发冲冠"?

Because I am not a singer, otherwise I will make you 怒发冲冠 for sure ... :)))

知凡, U R such a trouble-maker!!

:)

cheers everyone!!!!

[z.f.]

秋菱, I am so happy to let you 晕乎乎的~~~ :))))))

love your this translation too... it seems from a "神仙" JJ :))))))

my 园子:)...O, I am planting grapes in my 园子 now...
will make wine to let you more 晕乎乎的~~~ ... :)
be patient:)

SD, I really like you to let ZZ "怒发冲冠":)) you don't have the courage now??...please...:)))

cheers!!! friends...

[by水滴]

秋菱好：

你是知道俺的，离星们腕们很远很远。

俺说话受一点限制（ＺＺ又该怒发冲冠了），唱歌自由些。呵呵。

你近来可好？忙什么？

祝好！

[秋菱]

袒露的玫瑰
-----------

无物可以遮挡
你如水的
月光 --- 穿透心墙
古老的情歌
热血吟唱

你在每一处田野
每个人的心头
怒放
你满载夜的期盼
入眠 醒来浸饱了
泥土的 渴望

也许 那就是爱
如此简单，如此阳光
春风哼着小曲
欢快的音符
我们竟然无法
翻译传唱

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嗨~~~秋菱问大家好！

作舟的创作之泉似乎永远奔流，今天正好看见，赶紧来凑个热闹。免得过后补课，
还要劳你重贴。

知凡：你的赞美让我晕乎乎的~~~对了，园子怎么关门啦？

影云：你找来的图片总是那么完美~~~

水滴：呵，改当歌星了哈：))

美人鱼：老早以前，我古狗老师的东西，无意中进过你的博客(希望没有记错)，留
了言的，后来也没空回去查看，不知道你看见没有？

作舟这里好象还有不少新朋友~~~不及细看，一并问好！
近来忙得很，有空再来学习。

[y.y.]

i like that rearrangement too :)

hi to everyone :)

[z.z.]

z.f.,

you are on the right track if you are reading W.W.!!!!

:)

good luck!!

[z.f.]

zz: haha...!!!

I am serious:)...I mean I don't understand what I read before...that is a example... sometimes, 快乐 comes from understanding...

"Have you practiced so long to learn to read?
Have you felt so proud to get at the meaning of poems?
Stop this day and night with me and you shall possess the original of all poems"
---"Leaves of Grass"

my sense of humor needs improvement... :)

[z.z.]

zf, sd & mermaid,

thanks for sharing your beautiful writing/music, etc....all very inspiring!!!!

your translations are all very creative.....thinking about them now.....


水滴: “在水一方”是一首按诗经中的” 秦风“改写的民歌。　秦风就是秦国的民歌。它的调调早已失传。因为古代的秦国位于现在陕西一带，我猜想秦风调调大概类似于信天游吧！和在水一方这种港台靡靡之音肯定相差十万八千里！　（瞎猜的）。

veeeery interesting!!!!

zf: "我也很欣赏他的伴侣波伏娃，萨特给波伏娃的情书里常常是“我迷人的海狸”。。。英文"beaver":))...知识越多越“反动”，越快乐:)))

haha...!!!

美鱼儿: "喝喝，也是我的最爱！他们常去的咖啡馆我也去过，哪一张才是他们常坐的椅子呢？还有卢梭和笛卡尔。。。看看德国的哲学家吧。尼采。。。有一阵狂爱。后来发现真是疯狂啊。怪不得希特。。喜欢"

so, you are in Germany?? Cool!!!

[z.f.]

when I was young, I could not really understand what 萨特, 波伏娃 and other philosophers wrote...but art/poetry is helping me to love this beautiful world...

for me, 意识 takes a long time...

萨特: "存在的虚无"...
虚无: 宛然???
宛然...存在...
what 萨特...
waht a poem...
what a painting posted in this page...
so many feelings I don't know how to translate...

祝春天好！

[地中海人鱼]

喝喝，也是我的最爱！他们常去的咖啡馆我也去过，哪一张才是他们常坐的椅子呢？还有卢梭和笛卡尔。。。

看看德国的哲学家吧。尼采。。。有一阵狂爱。后来发现真是疯狂啊。怪不得希特。。喜欢

祝你春天好！回头再见-)！

[by水滴]

ＺＦ：　家中虽有诗经，但读得很少。主要是生字太多，又懒得查字典。。。：（（

很高兴你喜欢我的转贴。：）

[z.f.]

美鱼儿，你的翻译太有趣了：）

我记得你曾说你喜欢哲学。。。我年少时曾喜欢萨特，萨特关于爱情的见解，具体我记不清了，但他的观点是爱情是一种意识行为。。。一种必然，一种偶然。。。我也很欣赏他的伴侣波伏娃，萨特给波伏娃的情书里常常是“我迷人的海狸”。。。英文"beaver":))...知识越多越“反动”，越快乐:)))

“超脱 is the result of 意识。。。”(z.z.)

祝大家快快乐乐！！！

[地中海人鱼]

<赤裸的玫瑰>

你姣白的月亮
无可遮挡
光 --- 若隐若现
血滴吟唱着
古老的爱情
之曲

你 绽放在
一个人心底的
每一片土壤里
带着夜的愿望
你沉沉睡去
却于土地渴望的
深渊里
醒来

也许，这就是爱
如此纯净
闪烁着太阳的
光辉
当春风在耳边轻唱
那是人类
永远
无法捕捉的
快乐之音


(有些词稍微改了一下意思。别怪)

[z.f.]

水滴，谢谢你的歌，特别是ZT的“诗经。蒹葭”。。。读书时，很喜爱读“诗经”。。。

现在读来，想着古时人们民风民俗，没有仕途经济功成名就等等之类，依然“所謂伊人，在水一方。”。。。
。。。
遡游從之，宛在水中央。
。。。
遡游從之，宛在水中坻。
。。。
遡游從之，宛在水中沚。

我喜欢这首诗经里“遡洄”“遡游”。。。一遍又一遍。。。用的“宛”字。。。宛：仿佛。。。

作舟这首“NAKED ROSE”里的境界，读来已是“水澄镜朗”，“花月宛然”。。。“The happy notes”。。。谢谢分享。。。

[z.f.]

裸身的玫瑰

没有什么可以遮掩
你纯净的月
光 --- 透明的
血吟唱
古老的
情歌

每一处
你绽放
在一个男人的心上
你与夜的心愿
和欢睡去
沉梦里醒来
土地深底的渴望

或许，那就是爱
如此简单，如此开朗
春日的和风欢唱
快乐的音符
无法传至
人们的耳旁

[作舟诗集]

y.y.,
u r always soooo fast!! :)
really like it!!!!
especially:
也许，那就是爱
春风的欢歌
人耳无法诠释
如此简单，如此灿烂
the rearrangement is nice!!!
thanx!!

[y.y.]

赤裸的玫瑰

无法掩藏的
是你纯净的月
光 - - - 透明的血
在吟唱
悠远的爱之声

你 在一个男人心中
每一处盛放
与夜的愿望
一起躺下，于土地
深处的渴望中
醒来

也许，那就是爱
春风的欢歌
人耳无法诠释
如此简单，如此灿烂

[y.y.]

love it . . .