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PAPER BOAT ____________________________ Least parts thick leather old tires in remains planning victims of person’s age young bottom very damp giving out--- first large assessment of time killed in the head both of the last & first thought arriving… suggested sick went wrapped gone cardboard box tape tent considerably grand previous house where now was born branded death had been shoes no more :LTG, '05 (art: stole from carol es's living room :)
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影云 回复 悄悄话 纸船

最少的部件
厚实的皮革
破旧的轮胎
于残留里
规划年龄
的殉难者
幼嫩的底端
已潮湿
显示 - - -
匿迹头脑
时间的
第一次评断
最终
与最初的
思绪抵达 。 。。
暗示病情
重重包裹
已逝
纸板的盒
布条的帐篷
之前
极为壮观的屋
那儿
此刻曾诞生
昭彰的死亡
涉足
鞋,不再
LTG 回复 悄悄话 right on!

thanx!!!
影云 回复 悄悄话 喜欢它的内韵
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