WEEPING WILLOW (图)

WEEPING WILLOW As if wind could hear it. As if heart could mend it and contain the soul. As if love and sorrow were separate. As if we all fall into the belated stars prophesied by a bird. As if a lie could prolong the length of a dream. As if a poem were a small cry of grief. As if love could be written. As if words could hear it. :feb/05

[影云]

泣柳好！
你的修改更贴近原诗！！
开心可以给你启发：)

[LTG]

垂柳/泣柳[?]


犹如风能听见
犹如心能愈合，包容灵魂
犹如爱与悲哀可以分离
犹如我们坠入鸟儿预言的迟来之星
犹如谎言可以将梦延长
犹如诗是伤痛微弱的呐喊
犹如爱可被书写
犹如文字可以听见

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给我启发!

感谢:)

[影云]

哭泣的柳

犹如风能听到
犹如心能愈合，包容灵魂
犹如爱与悲哀可以分离
犹如我们坠入鸟儿预言迟来的星
犹如谎言可以延缓梦
犹如诗是伤痛微弱的呐喊
犹如爱可以写下来
犹如文字可以听到