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(2005-01-14 20:07:36) 下一个

Thank You for Being My Nightingale Thank you for being my nightingale when night grows deaf! Thank you for being my rain when dreams dying from thirst! Thank you for being my sky when Muse forgets how to fly! The man sings gratefully wherever his love might have roamed mountains, forests, fairytales or even winter’s garden Thank you for being my sister! Thank you for being my brother! Thank you for being my earth! Thank you for being my fire!
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影云 2005-01-14 20:37:03 回复 悄悄话 mmmmmm, you tooooooo:)
love it:)
LTG 2005-01-14 20:35:07 回复 悄悄话 it is ok, i think, to use -ing after when/while...but a little informal ...

thank you for reading!!!!

have a wonderful weekend!!!
影云 2005-01-14 20:24:59 回复 悄悄话 I can feel the Gratitude in the poem!!!
A question for line four: should “dying” be “are dying”


Thank you for bringing us happiness
Thank you for bringing us peace
…
through your poetry!!!

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