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我整理Max上学期的东西，又发现他的一些造句作业。上学期，他们每周有造句作业。他独出心裁地把老师给的5个不相关的造句的词，揉在一起，写成一个paragrahy小故事段。下面这几个他拿他的同学Idrees 和Ajan开玩笑，写成他们倆的对话。
他有的写的不那么准确，但挺幽默逗乐的。
用1properly 2 perfectly 3 deserving 4 blistering 5 permanent造句
“Karate chop properly!!”said Idrees.
“So, you want me to do it perfectly?”asked Ajan.
“Well, I guess you’re not deserving candy,” said Idrees.
“C’mon, my hands are blistering,”said Ajan.
“This candy is a permanent delioucious taste,” said Idrees.
用1permanent 2 government 3 everlasting 4 consumer 5 cavities造句
Ajan said,”I’m not a consumer.”
Idrees asked,”So you don’t eat?”
Ajan repied, “I have to eat for the government.”
Idrees asked, “Do you have everlasting cavities?”
Ajan repied, “No, but I have permanent cavities.”
下面是它用这组词，造的另外的一段
Everlasting cavities are weird. I don’t like them. I hope the government makes it against the law to have everlasting cavities. Maybe the law will be permanent. Who is the consumer of our pain?
用 1vegetable 2 vacation 3 capable 4 install 5 vocabulary
Idrees asked, “what’s your favourite vegetable, Ajan”?
Ajan replies, “vegetable.”
Idrees asked, “what’s your favourite vacation spot?”
Ajan replies, “vegetable.”
Idrees asked, “ Is Idrees asked, the only word your capable of saying?”
Ajan replies, “vegetable.” Idrees says, “
I think you should install anew vocabulary.”
用 1reserving 2 actual 3 customer 4 through 5 happened
Ajan yells, “Gimme food!”
Idrees says, “sorry sir, I’m reserving this seat for an actual customer.”
Ajan says, “This isn’t a cartoon, get me another table.”
Idrees asks, “What happened to your clothes?”
Ajan says, “ They’re see through.”
Creative Writing --Max 造句 (1)
http://blog.wenxuecity.com/blogview.php?date=201002&postID=32680
Creative Writing --Max 造句 (2)
http://blog.wenxuecity.com/blogview.php?date=201004&postID=18218
Creative Writing --Max 造句 (3)
http://blog.wenxuecity.com/blogview.php?date=201005&postID=24057
Creative Writing --Max 造句 (4)
http://blog.wenxuecity.com/blogview.php?date=201006&postID=22885
