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Creative Writing --Max 造句 (4)

(2010-06-21 20:37:16) 下一个

Max’s way of making sentences

Max又造句了。他独出心裁地把老师给的5个不相关的造句的词,揉在一起,写成一个paragrahy小故事段里,每次他还写上两段。

让我欢喜的是,通过Max的造句,我发现他的小脑袋瓜里还是有一些思想的,装的不光是电子游戏。。。

1 properly 2permanent 3 perfectly 4 deserving 5 blistering造句

Doing things properly is awesome. It might even become a permanent habit. If you do it perfectly, it’s even better than doing it properly. That tells you if you’re deserving greatness or failure, but your hands might be blistering. That’s why doing things properly is the best.

I wonder what it would be like if everything was blistering. The blisters would be permanent. The blisters would be properly shaped and perfectly pussy. But we wouldn’t be deserving that, would we? So we don’t want that to happen.

 

1 government 2 permanent 3 consumer 4 everlasting 5 cavities造句

I like the government. But it’s a consumer of our money. Hopefully they don’t have everlasting cavities.I want the government to be permanent.

Everlasting cavities are weird. I don’t like them. I hope the government makes it against the law to have everlasting cavities. Maybe the law will be permanent. Who is the consumer of our pain?


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Creative Writing --Max 造句 (1)

Creative Writing --Max 造句 (2)

Creative Writing --Max 造句 (3)




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