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Creative Writing --Max 造句(1)

(2010-02-23 09:35:52) 下一个

今天一早,我看到Max摊在桌上的作业本,看了他写的作业。他独出心裁的造句,实在是让我喜欢、高兴。


老师要求他们用
Strok slope remote control chose 5个词各造一个句子。Max却别开生面地把这5不相关的词揉在一起,放入一个paragrahy小故事段里,他还写了两个paragrahy


Today I had a stroke. I got it while I chose a remote. I needed a remote to control my robot. Did I mention I also slipped on a slope at the same time? I can’t believe I got a stroke.


Today I chose a cat for my pet. I have total control over it. How you ask, by using this remote. I stroke its fur softly and then we both fell down a slope. I like my cat!




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