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儿子的小说 - 蚂蚁历险记(1,2)

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   儿子安平时喜欢和姐姐玩编故事的游戏,他喜欢编传奇故事,自己做主角,主角常常惹麻烦,出问题,幽默搞笑。最近他迷上了威廉蚂蚁历险记的故事,我和霏听了,感觉很有趣,两周前我为他买了本笔记本,让他将故事写下来,他很快就写下了前三个章节,边写边笑,很享受编写小说的过程。

    上周的一天他在我博客上看到姐姐过去的文章,于是拿出他的笔记本,认真地叮嘱我,也要我将他的小说打进我的博客里,但我一直没有空儿去做。

    今夜两个孩子已熟睡,我在灯下打入安小说的前两章节,明天早上起来想象着他的大惊喜(big pleasant surprise)

    第一,二章节的故事梗概大致是:威廉蚂蚁去学校,午餐时贪食,去吃垃圾桶里的食物,没想到,他随垃圾车被倒进一个大垃圾场,他喊救命,但没有人能帮助他。为躲苍蝇,威廉爬出垃圾堆到树林里,林子里有个食蚁动物,尽管食蚁动物旁边有许多面包屑,他没敢去吃,又看到蜘蛛,为了避免被逮,他跑出了食蚁动物和蜘蛛的领地,恰好看到一个滑板架,他想坐滑板架回家,可是他分不清方向,因为已经失踪了,他只好选了一个方向,试图离开林子。

 

The Adventures of William 威廉蚂蚁历险记

作者:毕安(7岁)

 

William is an ant that sometimes gets in trouble and his owner's name is Joey. He does have a sister and her name is Ashlyn. Her owner's name is Rachel. She plays with him and is older. Ashlyn is nine and william is seven and they love crumbs. But they have a lot of differences. Here is one, William has a sweet tooth and Ashlyn doesn't. He will have lots of fun in this story.

 

Chaper One: William Gets in the Trash Can 第一章节:威廉进了垃圾桶

It was a school day so william went to school. He learned about stuff and had fun. Then it was lunch time. He started eating and then he saw another ant eating from the trash can. William then said: "Maybe I should try doing that." Then he did. He ate and ate until he was full. Then the trash can started moving and it went to the dump truck. The dump truck then put him in the dumps. William called out for help but no one heard him. Then he yelled, cried, whined and screamed, but there was no one to help.

 

Chapter Two: William Is Lost 第二章节:威廉失踪了

The flies came, and they were eating stuff from the dumps. So William got out and entered the woods. After he entered it, he had spotted an anteater. William was really scared. Then he saw crumbs near it and they look so tempting, but he knew that he could not eat it unless he wanted to be eaten by the anteater, so he quietly ran away. He went and went until he saw a spider. This time he knew he could get out of seeing anteaters or spiders, so he ran out and the next thing he saw was a skateboard. He thought he could use it to get out of trouble and to find his family, but he did not know which way to go and how to get out of the woods, so he just picked one way then another, so he was lost.

 

(To Be Continued -待续中)

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