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(2005-07-15 21:17:28)
塘沽兄您好，
大作读罢，受益匪浅啊！很多都说到小弟心坎里去了。小弟以为，大作在“体裁”和“语言”两方面进行了新旧的论述。似乎更注重在“语言”上。古板兄贴的文章小弟喜欢，出于个人对旧体诗词这一体裁的偏好。兄的文章则在“用语”上说出了小弟的心里话。其实小弟也一直在和多位高人讨论这个问题。您前面和一位朋友谈英文诗中诗人自己“造词”时就想向[阅读全文]
(2005-07-15 20:20:21)
Untitled . ... .... ..... ....... attheoddhour ofanunidenticalday ofthistwothousandoddyear iwakefromwhattheycallreality &stepintotheotherworld thattastesmorereal thanoctoberrain &foronceinmylife Iamhappilywet inadecent rain.... ...... .... .. . ::z.z.summer'05 foto:j.hendrix'ssite [阅读全文]
(2005-07-14 12:42:46)
Waves underthetuesdaysun iholdmyhand inmidday'slonging watchinglight travelthru blood tinylines becomewaveswashing thrunoon'sheart thesamewaves onyourlips inyourvoice deepwhirlling wavesinyour eyesarerising thrumy blood whatisit keepingmeup thewholenight ?? theuniverse inmypalm keepsexpanding waveskeep rollingrising towardstheplace whereyouleft yourson...[阅读全文]
(2005-07-12 18:07:30)
ABlue-domer'sPrayer Let'sbegin fromthebegin ninglet'sbe ginfromthe beginning letusbe fromthebe ginning letusbe bylettingus beginbeing thebeginninglet thebeginningbegin frombeingfromus thebeginning beginthebeginning beginfrom usletthe beginning beletthe beingbegin fromus letus beus let us b e . . . ::z.z.'04 [阅读全文]
(2005-07-11 19:46:09)
与楼下朋友的讨论可能有写‘偏差’，所以，另开一炉，欢迎添柴！
在秋菱设下的“罗网”里，大家提到“美”。。。
我们都对“美”感兴趣，向往美好。但，什么是“美”？？
美，没有一个固定的标准。
由于新诗不是中学生写作文，不需要固定的格式和篇幅的制约，所以，再
谈到新诗的“技术问题”时，就很容易“百家争鸣”了。
我指的新诗不仅仅限于我[阅读全文]
(2005-07-10 11:08:42)
秋菱／胖子／影云／野调等“诗画”新朋老友， 秋菱的贴子又勾出一番感触。 秋菱的新诗略带古气，但“新声／心声”溢与纸面。您就别“牵须”了！：） 我对学府／学腐式的诗学研究从不“感冒”，我对新诗的感觉完全来自实践，无门 无派，如巨蟹走路，顶八面来风，常常“声东击西”，随情致放浪，不拘形骸。侃 新诗多是心血来潮。 新诗不是“遗产”，如[阅读全文]
(2005-07-08 20:45:10)
"Happiness" Wheredoesitcomefrom? Whatisthereasonforthisfeelingofhappiness? Doesitarisefrommygoodlongsleep whichhasdonemesomuchgood? OrfromthewordOmwhichIpronounced? OrbecauseIhaverunaway,because myflightisaccomplished,because Iamatlastfreeagainandstand likeachildbeneaththesky? Ah,howgoodthisflighthasbeen,thisliberation! ::exerptsfrom"Siddhartha"byHermannHesse [On...[阅读全文]
(2005-07-07 20:53:13)
"LoveisforLosers"
waswhatisaw
onateenageboy'steeshirt--
hewasanartless,boredyoungteen
whocarriedaheavy
statement
inhisface
onhischest
inhiseyes
onhisshoulders
inhisheart
...
what'sfor"winners"then?
somanyyoungpeople
alreadyspent,bent
walkingaroundcarrying
astatement
likearustedsun
likealoadedgun
...
someonewashurt
deepinside
someoneisgoingto
hurtsomeone
tonight
......[阅读全文]
(2005-07-07 11:45:10)
《夜的南方》 夜的南方 是一汪蓝蓝的湖水 清澈见底的 是梦的 回廊 . . . 她走累了 他停住脚步 拨回时钟 将她轻轻依偎怀中 吻去她的疲惫 和夜的暗凉-- 信任 是抵御寒冷 最好的 秘方 . . . 她的眼底 是蓝蓝的湖水一汪 夜清澈 深不见底 她说: 梦的南方 是故乡 ::作舟,05年夏[阅读全文]
(2005-07-06 16:40:07)
PlantingStones Iamguiltyofuprootingyou fromthebottomofforest atwater'sedge whereIgrewenamored withtime'sshape& therawsmoothness ofsoul'sendurance forhours Iimmersedmyselfwithin asinglebody ofthetime-worn,water-kissed stone,sobeautifullydarkened bytheeternalsong inlowlight myexcuse wastheloveIfeltforyou andtheflowinglight overyourentirebeing Icouldnotpart andIknew...[阅读全文]
