【星空月夜花前授诗百首系列】:《一花,一桃》
文/天朝玉
终稿:
【A Flower, A Peach】
by Tian Chao Yu
Come and see me,
a flower, sweet and pretty,
stands tall like a lotus flower in a summer pond,
fragrant as a field daisy, innocent and free.
Come and see me,
a peach, supple and juicy,
blushes like a girl on her first date,
youthful as a runner in her morning dash.
Come and see me,
before the autumn wind swirls in,
love me like a butterfly kissing its favorite flower,
a gardener tasting his first peach of the season.
【一花,一桃】
文/天朝玉
快来看我吧,一朵美丽可爱的花
她像夏日池塘里的荷花,婷婷玉立
又如田野里幽香的野菊,自由纯真
快来看我吧,一个柔软味美的桃子
她像初次约会中的女孩,腼腆脸红
又如晨跑中的运动员,充满青春活力
快来看我吧,在纷飞的秋风到来之前
爱我,如蝴蝶亲吻它最喜爱的花
惜我,如园丁品尝收获季节的第一个桃子
万维读者网的版主曹雪葵把这首诗写成古诗,用诗经和楚辞的原素,真是古色古香,好美呀!
中文译作: 《秾萏夭桃》 by 曹雪葵
田田秾萏,沐影塘涟,
縠衣含秀兮,香黛融烟,
嗟汝君子,胡不我觇?
沁沁夭桃,舒袖村漻,
羞靥初浅兮,胭脂新调。
嗟汝君子,胡不我瞧?
期汝怎耐,光辉焉再,
当赊蝶羽兮,值秋未逮。
田田秾萏,沁沁夭桃,
爱哉惜哉,莫负春宵
2016.7.29
初稿:
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