石畔鹰熊恋--试译bearsback回文英诗

 

 

石畔咸风

倒吹困熊

高浪击趾头

长柳挠鼻窦

鱼跃浪峰

 

熊何白绒

栖离穴洞？

疲惫何不休？

石畔

 

鸟鸣惊容

一丝诡秘从

长舌伸悠

口水直流

在哪垂涎好桃羹？

石畔

 

 

 

beside that rock (鹰熊恋 bird-bear love): a rondeau

 

bearsback 于 10-06-07 00:56:24

 

 

beside that rock in salty air
retreats a tired and sleepy bear
high waves now start to pound his toes
long willow leaves then poke his nose
and flounders jump out everywhere

why does the bear with hoary hair
relax in here, not in his lair?
why does this weary bear not doze
beside that rock?

a birdcall sends a smile so rare
across his face not really fair
his dangling tongue now quickly grows
from which profusely fluid flows
where does he drool for an affair?
beside that rock

rondeau： thirteen lines of eight syllables （iambic tetrameter here),
two refrains (half lines and four syllables each),
three stanzas with rhyme scheme: (1) A A B B A (2) A A B with refrain: C (3) A A B B A with concluding refrain C and
the refrain must be identical with the beginning of the first line

由于rondeau结构复杂，写这个格式的人甚少。 务必自己不要在家操练， 以免走火入魔， 切记。