水的随想

•      一滴水,可形成涓涓溪流,
       一滴水,可形成百世冰峰.
       她的喜怒,她的刚柔,
       亦可载舟,亦可覆舟.
               我的爱有大江的热烈激情,亦有小河的恬静温柔.更有大海的宽容,广大...
       感受着清风明月,默默无语,内心却奔泻如水.
               我动情于一沙一石之细,一草一木之微.荡漾的内心于这恬静的夜晚形成了鲜明的对照.
               回来吧,我的爱,尽管你象滚滚东去的江水一去不复,我对你的爱却是覆水难收. 我曾在松花江岸畅想着李白桃花潭水深千尺的激情,如今我却在多瑙河畔无奈着人生长恨水长东的叹息.息..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    

[风中秋叶]

同意霞的点评。学习！

[霞]

写的不错呀！有感情！

再深沉些就更让人动情了！