我的第一首英诗习作 The Garage Sale

                       
                   The Garage Sale

                                                                             By  Shen, Li

            Today I passed by Post Road,

    There the great mansions are located.

    Following the arrows flying,

    I got the last place where you were hiding.

 

    Modern Poetry is over fifty years old, then

    A guy said：“ My grandpa’s, pay what you can.”

         Your handwriting, your sigh and smile,

         Between pages mixed with a moldy smell.

 

         I put the book in the sunshine in my home,

         Now you’ll feel bright and warm.

         I know some years later, somewhere,

         My fate will be the same as well.

                                           Sept. 28, 2013

                              My first English Poem

    （第一首英诗习作，很可能 “通身罅漏，触目疮瘢”。
万望城内外网客，友朋，同好，里手及方家不吝赐教。
趣图由网络顺来，谢谢制作。）

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回复 'stillthere' 的评论 :

谢谢来访，多交流！

[stillthere]

欣赏。也写出了我的经历和感受。

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回复 '*shiyan*' 的评论 :
小燕子好！含桃花谢杏花开，杜宇新啼燕子来。
惭愧大诗。小诗一首，just practice my English.
五一并周末愉快！

[*shiyan*]

欣赏英诗佳作!敬仰大诗!

周末问好!

[沈漓]

谢清痕来访，带来春雨一片。周末愉快。

[雨落清痕]

问候沈先生。 拜读英文诗作。