博大家一笑-- 我家老大正在写的一个故事

大家可能看不到的进步是现在分行是整个字分了， 以前是写到哪个字母就分到哪个字母。

*注： 她的错字我都没改， 直接打出来的*

XXX was a Princess, a Pertty Princess. (*关键时刻就有南方口音? XXX是我的名字*)
a Pertty gardener Princess. a
evil woralder that had wanted (*woralder是什么？ 我们猜是War Lord*)
to throw her in a tower and
Never un lock her. his name was
Earac. he was meaner than any
other worarlder. he was so bad
he could make the
gardener pr princess cry.
it was good there was a Prince
Named XXXX. he was handsomer *XXXX是爸爸的名字*
than any Prince. he was
stronger than any other
Prince. he was stranger (*LOL*)
Than any other Prince.
and he was a hunter prince
who shoots Anamils in the
forest. he has Arows that
Shoot thogh his bow
bow that shoot the
Anamils. for their dinner
tey eat deers wild deers
they eat wild horses and
they eat all kinds of
things since the
live in the forest.
She got trappt and
Prince ran on his deer and
rided his deer to the tower.
but he couldent make it
that good cause it took
18 days and years to go to
the tower. she was so
far away up in the
tower.

[cncjcc]

太优秀了，pre-K 就会这么写了，真不错。 最好笑的是prince charming 是骑着鹿救公主的，哇哈哈哈， 最后还太困难了，好像没救着。