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Sitting Lonely on Jingting Mountain
by Bai Li
All birds disappeared from the skyway.
A single cloud came and went restfully away.
Only the Jingting Mountain
that was never tired of my fool stay.
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独坐敬亭山
李白
众鸟高飞尽,
孤云独去闲。
相看两不厌,
只有敬亭山。
“山”字错打成了“上”。
“两不厌”确实没有表达完整。但要表达完整,觉得有点困难:要不多加一句,要不就难做到末句与前面的压韵。这就是为什么“偷工减料”(连同一二两句,觉得也能讲得通,鸟和云都离我而去,仅有山还没嫌弃我),不想被明察秋毫的雨兄一眼识破。
”两不厌“意思似乎没有很好表达出来。