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(2025-02-22 07:30:29) 下一个

俺写的歌词,上传后不到一分钟除了2个版本,比较一下,哪个好听些

 

Wet Dream

Once upon a time in the Gaslamp District
I was walking my Scottish Terrier Biscuit
We strolled deep into the district
Suddenly stopped and barked my poor Biscuit
From the corner of a pride banner alley
Marching out a rowdy rally
After a sniff Biscuit started dashing and weaving
through the rally without clashing
I was pulled sprinting and panting
while deafened by the most synched chanting
Lets go Brandon
Lets go Brandon
As we reached the end of the rally
we saw a gigantic puppet upside down
Its an inflated black-suit buffoon
wearing an wavy orange crown
Biscuit sneaked around the the balloon
till he stopped in front of a grand building
Its neons flashing rainbow at high noon
DEPARTMENT OF JUSTICE
my Biscuit barked out his sign reading
Pace and sniff, pace and sniff
He spotted a drying rack tall and wide
Hung on the rack a king bed sheet
fancy enough for the royal groom and bride
Biscuit sniffed and sneezed at a conspicuous stain
Its shape looked like a country club in Spain
I image searched the stain with my iPhone
AHA, its Mar-a-Lago in a Tsunami zone
Before I google Mar-a-Lago I may adore
I was tapped by a blonde circling on roller-skates
She pointed at Hooters next door
Smelly the fried chicken I just ate
I shook my head n pointed at the stain
She glanced and bursted out Oh, not again
To answer my confusion to her scream
she bent down and whispered to my brain
Its hand drawing of our AGs wet dream

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颤音 回复 悄悄话 回复 'JoyAnna.' 的评论 : 是啊,复杂的程度超出了我的想象,而且确实传递了emotions
JoyAnna. 回复 悄悄话 两首都不错!第一首像是完整的音乐作品,有音乐结构,有始有终。第二首,开门见山,节奏简洁利索。听起来很有力,让人感受到了愤怒的力量。
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