来几句属于没话找话说和有话不好好说类的或者梨花体的馅饼结果还有点评的哈哈哈

Twilight and shadow
 
In the moment before sunrise
Creatures are bathed by twilight
Free
Not pulled by their shadows

Creatures are showered by the sun
Drag their shadows and wander

In the moment after sunset
Creatures are bathed by twilight
Free
No longer pulled by their shadows

vague interpretation of light and shadow ©  25 days ago,    vaguely spiritual   
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Jenny Middleton - I like the way the imagery in the two stanzas of this  poem works like mirror images of each other. Good share  3 days ago   x rate:  ,  ,    skip

 

Mazterpeace - Very well written!!! Starting and ending the poem with the same verse is my type of poetry. Takes skill!!! Kudos!!!

Nicely done 25 days ago   x rate:  ,  ,    skip