飘向远方的，是对家的眷念！
在风中，她们欢乐地寻找，哪里是可以歇息的、温暖的家园？那要是个有花有草、有山有水和有爱的地方！
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你说我是草原上一轮不落的太阳，
很想和我一起骑上骏马奔驰，
迎着那轮不落的太阳；
我来了，
你在哪里？
你说我是花园里一株不起眼的勿忘我，
散发幽香，惹你驻足；
我为你忘记了我自己，
而你，
也忘了我！
你说我是书架上一本不厚的书，
很想把它读完，
却怎么也读不完；
我愿意为你敞开我的魂灵，
而你，
为何不懂？
你说我是清晨里一只爱唱歌的鸟儿，
很想知道它为什么快乐；
我正想告诉你，
那是因为有你倾听我歌唱呀，
却发现，
你已离去！
You said, that I was the unsetting sun on the grassland,
That you wished to gallop with me hand in hand;
Welcoming the unsetting sun,
Here I am,
Where are you in the land?
You said, that I was an unattractive forget-me-not in the flower garden,
That you were mesmerized by the aroma in a sudden,
I forgot myself just for you,
But you,
Forget me you did without being sullen.
You said, that I was a small pamphlet among the tomes on a bookcase,
That you desired to pore over it but never did you cease;
I opened my heart just for you,
But you,
Confounded you were never at peace.
You said, that I was a lovely songbird in the early morning,
That you longed to learn why she has a joyful feeling,
I told you it’s because of my singing you enjoyed,
But you,
Depart you did without returning!
That you wished to gallop with me hand in hand;
Welcoming the unsetting sun,
Here I am,
Where are you in the land?
You said, that I was an unattractive forget-me-not in the flower garden,
That you were mesmerized by the aroma in a sudden,
I forgot myself just for you,
But you,
Forget me you did without being sullen.
You said, that I was a small pamphlet among the tomes on a bookcase,
That you desired to pore over it but never did you cease;
I opened my heart just for you,
But you,
Confounded you were never at peace.
You said, that I was a lovely songbird in the early morning,
That you longed to learn why she has a joyful feeling,
I told you it’s because of my singing you enjoyed,
But you,
Depart you did without returning!
? 这首不错。欣赏 - 乐天陶陶 - 给 乐天陶陶 发送悄悄话 乐天陶陶 的博客首页 乐天陶陶 的个人群组 (0 bytes) (4 reads) 09/29/2014 20:48:37
? 跟在陶兄后欣赏。 - 曲未平 - ♂ 给 曲未平 发送悄悄话 曲未平 的博客首页 曲未平 的个人群组 (0 bytes) (0 reads) 09/30/2014 03:18:31
? +2，同赏！ - 寒砚 - ♀ 给 寒砚 发送悄悄话 寒砚 的博客首页 寒砚 的个人群组 (0 bytes) (1 reads) 09/30/2014 03:40:55
? 这玩笑开大了；）好清新的诗！ - 醉狐 - ♀ 给 醉狐 发送悄悄话 醉狐 的博客首页 醉狐 的个人群组 (0 bytes) (0 reads) 09/29/2014 20:56:53
? Nicely done on both. But there might be some typos like "I want - 逢缘随意 - ♂ 给 逢缘随意 发送悄悄话 逢缘随意 的博客首页 逢缘随意 的个人群组 (19 bytes) (3 reads) 09/29/2014 20:57:12
? 娓娓道来的浓情蜜意，伴着不料的转局！对比的情景冲突，令人感叹不已！！ - 品羽题红 - ♂ 给 品羽题红 发送悄悄话 品羽题红 的博客首页 品羽题红 的个人群组 (0 bytes) (2 reads) 09/30/2014 00:17:16
? 二段的末句，也忘记了我！如改成4个字：已忘记我！这样就同各段末句都是4个字，都划一了。 - 品羽题红 - ♂ 给 品羽题红 发送悄悄话 品羽题红 的博客首页 品羽题红 的个人群组 (0 bytes) (6 reads) 09/30/2014 00:21:24
? 谢谢建议！已改成：“也忘了我”，这样就划一了。 因为我忘了自己，而你又忘我就顺理成章成了"也“， 双重忘记强... - 蒲公英的家 - ♀ 给 蒲公英的家 发送悄悄话 蒲公英的家 的博客首页 蒲公英的家 的个人群组 (0 bytes) (1 reads) 09/30/2014 07:28:44
? 很优美的诗，中英都好。欣赏！ - 胶老爷 - ♂