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Miss Right by nuts000 于 10-08-20 11:47:45

-- 谢谢茉儿介绍石进原《夜的钢琴曲》之五

You are my Miss Right
Not the left nor the right
Right there in the light
of the classroom we met

I knew I had to try
second time just might
get your bite out right

It was your voice alright
soaking me in the delight
as if we meant for that night

You said you were quite uptight
all I could feel was feather light
since my heart flew out like a kite

You were quite noticeable on the first sight
You said you did not notice my height
None of those mattered after the delight
flushed our hearts at the speed of light

标题： 蜜思正爱

你是我的蜜思正爱，
既不左也不右歪，
在彼此相遇的教室光忆中摇摆。

我须再次尝试我明白，
甚或不惜第二次在你咬啮下失败受灾。
是你的柔声相待，
浸润得我舒畅愉快，
好似我俩就在那夜彼此合拍。

你说你极为烦躁无奈，
然而我却只感到如羽之轻甩，
因为我心已如风筝向天飞迈。

你是如此令人注目一眼惊呆，
你说你根本不注意我的高矮。
那些表象都在心灵愉悦之外，
两心交流有若电驰光闪方兴未艾。


Strayed mind by nuts000 于 10-08-08 22:54:56

Could you ever stay?
Nay, not without a pay
Oh hell! I am not a pile of clay

I shall float like a cloud as far as it strays
I shall immerse into the ray
of sunlight to its day
of moonlight to its grey

Up to the mountain as fog sprays
Down to the river as water sways
Follow me if you are not afraid
Chasing you if you are are up to a play

Leaving you is not necessarily betrayed
Hugging you is not necessarily obeyed
Mind you
Mind me
Mind to the Milky Way
through darkness~ zillions miles away ...


标题： 游灵

问你可否驻留？
不字你说， 如若无酬。
见鬼哦！ 我非黏土一撮。

我将如云远逸飘游，
我将似白日阳光， 灰月阴芒辐射线般浸没。

上升至高山如雾一样的迷惑，
下沉到江河如水一样的漂流。
如果你无所畏惧就跟着我走，
如果你存心嘻戏我必将你追求。

离开你不必然是背叛成仇，
拥抱你不尽然是相从相守。

心之向你，心之向我，
心之向着银河宇宙，
无边的距离呵~~~黑暗穿梭，~~~~远得无尽头。


Eye to Eye by nuts000 于 10-08-08 18:51:30

--after watching movie 2012

The ground could be live fry
The shake could be frenzy ride
The water could be the Mt. Everest's height
The crack could be hell's dye

When the world's time to say goodbye
I don't think I want to cry
no time to ask why
too late to sigh

Just want to connect you eye to eye
with hands being long lastly tied
you are my sky
forever high

The nature born us with extreme pride
The nature could end us without a cry
Hello World
simply flashes by
World Goodbye~

标题： 以眼还眼之告

地面可能被油炒煎烤
天崩地裂疯狂的颤摇
水位达至圣母峰般高
地面的缺口染着地狱的色调

当与世界说再见的时刻来到
我想我不会哭叫
为什么是没有时间可问道
叹息也来不及出口成调

只想与你眼目相对就好
伴随最后与你长相执手紧握不掉
你是我的天空，永远高耸不摇

上苍欲我们生时予我们以无上的骄傲
上苍欲我们死时不会许以悲怜的哀号

“世界你好”
轻而易举就在“世界再会”的回光中返照。

[ling1984]

回复nuts000的评论:
核班太客气，你的英文原诗写得好，我这是狗尾续貂，献丑了。

[nuts000]

俺回的更晚，年都过了：）叩谢，都收走了。真会用韵，服你了！

[ling1984]

回复海上云的评论:
多谢云弟鼓励，姐姐这两个星期忙，回复晚了，莫怪。

[海上云]

这个翻译的难度很高，韵很紧。

翻得好，更难得的是诗心。