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查改段落中病句

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找出段落中的病句

 

Part A Directions: Underline the sentence fragment in each paragraph below.

1.         To get to the stadium大运动场 from your hotel, take a left out the front

Entrance入口 and walk three blocks街区 to the subway station marked显著的

Elmwood榆木. Take the subway地铁 westbound西行的 for seven stops. Until

you reach Huntington Station. Exit 出离the train and follow signs for

Shapleigh Stadium. The entire整个 trip should take fewer少于 than 30 minutes.

 

2.            The largest source来源 of revenue收入 for the organization. Sales of cold

Drinks are expected期待 to hit record highs 打破高纪录this summer, in part

due 应付款to Record high temperatures温度 in June and July. Although 虽然

proceeds 收益from Sandwiches and snacks 小吃、快餐have not risen 增加

rise的过分词)dramatically引人瞩目地, close to 70 casesOf soft drinks

per day have been sold. Organization leaders are very pleased with profit 利润

outlooks前景 for the year.

 

3.            We are pleased to announce宣布 that Sam Baker is February’s

Employee of the Month. Sam has consistently一贯地 met all company-set

goals 目标and is a valuable有价值的 member of the team. In keeping with

Company policy, Mr. Baker will receive a $1,000 bonus 奖金as well as

preferred 首选的parking in the company lot. Please join us in

Congratulating祝贺 Sam. When you see him around the office. He

Deserves应受 great praise赞扬(raise涨工资) and recognition.重视

 

4.                    Getting a great deal交易 on a flight for your vacation is possible .

       If you are able to plan ahead 向前and do some of your own research. 研究

      Most important, purchase your ticket as soon as you know the dates

      you will be traveling. Buying 21 days in advance预付款 can save you a

     great deal 大量of money. In addition, try to fly after 7:00 P.M. These flights

     are less 少的popular受欢迎 for business travelers and can therefore 因此

     be cheaper. Finally, shop around. Don’t assume设想 all airlines are

     charging the same rate.比率、价格

 

修改段落中的病句

 

Part B  Directions: Correct the fragments in the paragraph below by joining 连接

                                each fragment to a sentence in the paragraph. Use the lines

                                provided倘若to rewrite改写 the paragraph.

 

Finding time for yourself. Is an important part of a healthful 有益健康的

life. You may be neglecting忽视 your own needs. If you are constantly

不变地 focused 聚焦的on the needs of other people. Research研究 shows

that people who set调整、置 aside到旁边time to do what they enjoy

are actually实际上 better spouses夫妻, friends, and coworkers. Than

those who spend all their time accommodating随和的 others.

 

1. Finding time for yourself is an important part of a healthful life .

2. You may be neglecting your own needs if you are constantly…..

 

3……and coworkers than those who spend all their time …..

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