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鹊桥仙 金风弄云，烟雨点秋，一水盈盈扁舟。天上人间叙旧约，万感并生离人愁。 舞翩杨柳，歌尽桃花，巫山云雨无凭鹊桥仙。
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蝶恋花 情人

(2009-02-20 01:10:21) 下一个
春到临春万物苏，欣欣向荣，蜂蝶飞无数。连理枝头侬与你，万花千草玫瑰先。 水佩风生小荷尖，万般风情，点点映山红。豆蔻香飘杨柳青，二月征人独自醉。
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Midway8989 2009-02-20 01:45:32 回复 悄悄话 There is a good and fresh feeling in it. But, technically, 数, 先, 红 and DO NOT share the same rhyme. There is a sort of music-sheet for 蝶恋花, you should look up to it.

Nevertheless, I am very glad to read it.
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