criticism

Well, look the winners in war who were not received formal military training against those who were.
Although my writing is not standard, it has no error in expressing a basic idea at this time. I thank but do not agree with your criticism.
After my book published if you happen to cross it, you have plenty room to voice your opinion, it will be on Amazon.
Again, I will be confronted with the authorities, who may not weigh my writing as you labeled firstly but the ideas.
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