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How I Started a Snowman


by: Alexander Li


When I was making a snowman, I didn’t know what to do. But then I had an idea. I was making the head. But then I give up because I couldn’t get it out and then my mom said to come in. But I didn’t because I weren’t jealous about building a snowman. So then I came in because my mom told me to (then again).


Tomorrow I started a snowman with my sister and dad. I still didn’t know what to do but then I saw my dad roll a ball. I asked if I could do it and my dad said yes. So I helped him do it. But my sister wanted to do the head because I already helped my dad. But then we needed a carrot so I went inside to ask mom for a carrot and she gave me one.


I came back outside and the snowman was finished! Instead of coal it was twigs. But no arms. I can’t get a branch a pull it off because it needs to grow.

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不少拼写和文法错误。他愿意写我就高兴了。
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秋月冬雪 回复 悄悄话 回复 '阿小饼' 的评论 :

饼饼好。刚刚把以前写的东西搬到博客。:)
还有一些要搬。
阿小饼 回复 悄悄话 说的对,愿意写最让人高兴,愿意写,非常重要!:D
阿小饼 回复 悄悄话 嗷也,一气儿贴了这么多,真好,额慢慢看:D
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