Could it be a little more poetic?
 
On a rainy day
Drizzle washes away your desolation
 
Breathe calmly
Writing to the one you are falling with
 
People say Love is like
A delicate exotic fruit;
Touch it
And the bloom is gone
 
But they have not seen
The apparent interest of theirs’
In passion is complete pseudo
 
Grief ages us
If we do not believe in Love
 
No matter what happens
We believe in it
 
Even, till the very end
I can still smell
Your refreshing fragrant hair
 
When your soul
Like silent wings of an angel
Come shining through
 
It makes loving you
More than a dream comes true
 
Dance through waves of passion
All cross oceans
 
For a moment in time
I could feel I am free
 
There are waves of forgiveness and regret
And the first wave of true love
I will never forget
 
Lift your eyes and see the truth
Hold you in my arm and tonight, we see skies