For the Woman of my life

So long I wished for this moment,

Sad and lonely I went,

 

From profile to profile looking everywhere,

On Internet I was hoping to find you there,

 

I was feeling abandoned and rejected, what a pity,

Until you finally answered me,

 

Now my heart is overwhelmed with joy, every single day,

You are my sunshine ray,

 

Being with you, holding you in my arms,

You are oh so warm,

 

Caressing your neck with my lips of fire,

Feeling you tremble with desire,

 

Like a beautiful sky of blue,

You are my wish come true,

 

I want to make you happy forever,

With all my love


- Dan on Oct. 7, 2008
 

附上W博士的美妙翻译 ：）

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给我的今生爱人

如此盼望这一刻
长久的等待　使我暗淡使我寂寞

多少档案一一翻过
网络中我期待　你在那里等我

仿佛已被抛弃和拒绝，我深深失落
直到终于　你回复了我

现在的每一天　快乐都在我的心中荡漾
你是我明媚的阳光

和你在一起　拥你入怀
你是多么地，啊，温暖着我

我火热的唇亲吻着你洁白的脖颈
感受你　在爱中轻轻颤抖

恰如天空美丽的湛蓝
你是我虔诚的梦　成真

我会给你幸福永远
用我全部　全部的　爱情

[longhairr]

回复静谧海湾的评论:
Thank you very much. Sorry, I almost overlooked your replies here. Last time when I saw your words under the recent post, I was happy and went to your blog reading for quite a while. I guess that's why I forgot to check whether you left more than that..hehe..

I'm glad to know that MM likes my story. Best wishes to you and your family as well. :)

[静谧海湾]

回复worldling的评论:

很喜欢. 你的翻译, 精确美丽， 热烈深情。

[静谧海湾]

So beautiful, touching and full of love and passion...

I am very happy for Longhair MM and Dan.

I read your love story and really enjoy it.

Wish all the best to you two,

[worldling]

长发妹，对我这种给个棒槌就当针使的人，你这回是赶鸭子上架了：）请长发和别的MM一定不吝斧正, 斧顺, 斧精！

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给我的今生爱人

如此盼望这一刻
长久的等待　使我暗淡使我寂寞

多少档案一一翻过
网络中我期待　你在那里等我

仿佛已被抛弃和拒绝，我深深失落
直到终于　你回复了我

现在的每一天　快乐都在我的心中荡漾
你是我明媚的阳光

和你在一起　拥你入怀
你是多么地，啊，温暖着我

我火热的唇亲吻着你洁白的脖颈
感受你　在爱中轻轻颤抖

恰如天空美丽的湛蓝
你是我虔诚的梦　成真

我会给你幸福永远
用我全部　全部的　爱情

[longhairr]

回复worldling的评论:
Dr. W, long time not see you here. Nice to see you today.

Someone gave a task to translate this poem into Chinese so that Dan can recite it in Chinese someday. Could you help me on translation? :)

[longhairr]

回复想去看海的评论:
看海MM, you can feel my passions and love or his? I guess from this poem, it's his. :)

[longhairr]

回复阿贝的评论:
Thanks, A Bei. I was touched indeed. :)

[worldling]

"For the Woman of my life"

I am so touched right from this title.

Keep it up, Dan! You are a very very lucky man :-)

[想去看海]

So happy for Jiejie and Dan! I can feel your passions and love, best wishes to you.

[阿贝]

what a touching poem...
feel happy for longhair and Dan...
bless both of you...

[longhairr]

回复warmginger的评论:
不敢了,不敢了, 下次MM告诉我哪壶是开的吧,我就提那壶...嘿嘿...

[warmginger]

回复longhairr的评论: 长发，你真是哪壶不开提哪壶:-)

[longhairr]

回复hairycat的评论:
thanks. You are right, now I have some many babies in my life...small ones, and big one. :))

[longhairr]

回复warmginger的评论:
because you have got a cold again...hehe...do you find sb else to have a cold with you this time? :)

[warmginger]

This is simply so hot!!!
How come I came late for this one???

[hairycat]

longhair, this poem is red-hotly romantic. You must be a beautiful lady inside out so that you can inspire Dan wrote such a beautiful poem for you. Life with love is very beautiful, indeed.

Enjoy the beautiful life with your babies.

[longhairr]

回复南山松的评论:
It is a nice peom, isn't it? :)

[longhairr]

回复陈默的评论:
Life is beautiful indeed. JJ yourself have showed us that by your words and your stories as well. Thank you. :)

[longhairr]

回复ELEVEN的评论:
To be frank, I used to think he should be good at peoms than those analysis essays. However, he surprised me last time. Then, he surprised me again this time, but with joys.

I joked with him that he had learnt a lot from lyrics since he likes music a lot.

[longhairr]

回复mycereal的评论:
You LD doesn't have to say those three words because he has expressed them to you by actions all the time. Am I right? :)

[longhairr]

回复Eyre的评论:
Ger told me a little bit more about you. Now, I understand why we have many thoughts in common...hehe....Hug Hug!

[longhairr]

回复agentsmith的评论:
Your comment of "Don't hope.. just know it.." is so so correct...you see, Dan applied it to his reply.

[南山松]

So good!

Very nice!

[陈默]

Longhair,

I am really touched after reading your love story. It makes me feel that life is beautiful, soooooo beautiful!

Please say hi to Dan. :-)

[longhairr]

Thanks for all the nice words!

I would like to say that what happened to us is quite different from the movie, although there is some similitude.

Both Neo and I were awaken (kind of) from this dream, an apparent reality.
A reality that blinded us from the real world. But unlike the Matrix “real world”, the one I discovered was wonderful… And best of all in this “real world”, I share my life with this amazing woman.

I can say truly: I don’t think I’m the one for her, I know I am!

Dan

[歌儿]

Wow!!!!

I will have to find someone who can write such a peom for me! Well done Dan! you deserve longhair just like she deserves you!

Eyre: now it is your turn, get your big bear to write something like this! :)

[ELEVEN]

“Tears in my eyes for the grace and joy of love
All the best, best and best to longhair and Dan.”－－ZT

长发JJ，你们家这位先生可不仅仅会写小论文呢，我看这首情诗更胜一筹：）

[mycereal]

oh, this is so sweet, so warm, so romantic, full of love and joy:-) ZT 100%.

我家那位，连个我爱你这句话都不会说。怎么都不说。呵呵。

[Eyre]

OMG, what a beautiful and romantic poem
Tears in my eyes for the grace and joy of love
All the best, best and best
to longhair and Dan.

[agentsmith]

回复longhairr的评论:

Hehe, knock,knock:-)

This remind me of the words Morpheus once told Neo:" Don't think you are, know you are...."

Don't hope.. just know it.. you two will have a much better destiny! :-)

Best wish to Longhair and Dan:-))

[longhairr]

Agentsmith, the Matrix has you...
I love her (Longhair), as Neo loved Trinity.
I'm the chosen, one as Morpheus and the Oracle predicted. Hopefully, we will have a better destiny...

Dan

[agentsmith]

回复longhairr的评论:
of course, I am Agentsmith, I am always right on time...haha:)

[agentsmith]

Oh, this is so sweet, so warm, so romantic, full of love and joy:-)

Longhair: you are a lucky lady! happy for you and RR:)

[longhairr]

探长,你,你,你也太快了吧...我连EDIT都没做好, 沙发就归你了? :)

[agentsmith]

sofa!