《I will be there》

You and I must make a pact, we must bring salvation back
Where there is love, I'll be there
I'll reach out my hand to you, I'll have faith in all you do
Just call my name and I'll be there
Chorus:
And oh - I'll be there to comfort you,
Build my world of dreams around you, I'm so glad that I found you
I'll be there with a love that's strong
I'll be your strength, I'll keep holding on - yes I will, yes I will
Let me fill your heart with joy and laughter
Togetherness, well that's all I'm after
Whenever you need me, I'll be there
I'll be there to protect you, with an unselfish love I respect you
Just call my name and I'll be there
(chorus)
If you should ever find someone new, I know he'd better be good to you
'Cos if he doesn't, I'll be there
Don't you know, baby, yeah yeah
I'll be there, I'll be there, just call my name, I'll be there
(Just look over your shoulders, honey - ooh)
I'll be there, I'll be there, whenever you need me, I'll be there
Don't you know, baby, yeah yeah
I'll be there, I'll be there, just call my name, I'll be there...

[偶尔务农]

谢谢倚梦老师，我下来好好体会

[倚梦幻歌]

整体的乐感非常棒，很完整！

发音是个问题，一部分是口音的问题，多年的习惯问题真的不容易改！如：salvation “v”不是“w”。我记得你的普通话也有口音，是不是？呵呵！
因为高音部分基本上都没有用到气息，全都在用你的喉咙喊，那很定是会累的。最后一句若全用假声会更好！你的问题好像不是很会用假声。just call my name 的 name 有假声的状态。