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I Love My Little Cat! 我爱我的小猫! (第五章)

(2009-10-07 16:29:58) 下一个

请原谅俺小心眼儿,舍不得把故事贴全,俺开始着手在北美和中国寻找出版机会。俺觉得俺的故事有趣,对孩子学习英语有帮助。中国小孩学英语最大的问题是不爱读出来,有个朗朗上口的有趣故事,孩子会爱读些。


I Love My Little Cat!
(我爱我的小猫!)共5章,97rhyming verses段,每个verse段的第二、四行完全压韵。下面是第五章。

 

I Love My Little Cat! (chapter 5)

5What A Wonderful World!

Such an adorable cat,

I was very thankful for.

Mimi slept with me each night.

I could hear her gently snore.

 

Very early this morning,

I woke and opened my eyes.

Where was my cute little cat?

Mimi gave me a surprise.

 

Among my stuffed animal friends,

Dog, cat and my beloved panda bear,

She pretended she was a toy

And didn’t move a single hair.

 

Like beautiful round marbles,

Mimi’s two eyes always shine.

They are golden yellow but

The pupils are black like mine.

 

When she was pondering,

She didn’t blink and didn’t meow.

She could stare very long.

That really surprised me, wow!

 

Every time when Mimi and I

Had a staring contest for fun,

I opened my eyes hard and wide,

But my cat, Mimi, always won.

 

I am proud to saythat Mimi is

The smartest cat in my neighbourhood.

When I gave her a command,

She responded as fastas she could.

 

I knows Mimi very well.

She know me very well too.

How do we know each other?

It’s a bit hard to tellyou.

 

We children and our pets

Just know each other,

Like how all people know

Their sister and brother.

 

Children and pets are siblings.

Who is old? Who is small?

We children and our pets

Never ever care at all.

 

I’m a curious young girl.

I like to look around.

What a wonderfulworld!

New things, I often found!

 

Mom, Dad and I were havingtea.

My cat, Mimi, slept atmy side.

I told my newdiscovery

To my parents withpride.

  

“Chinese and Canadian people

Look different, you all know.”

I sipped a bit of green tea,

“Their cats look the same, though.”

 

“They all speak the same language;

Meow, meow, meow,”Dad smiled.

“So they don’t need ESL like me,”

Mom said this like a shy child.

 

My dad and I both laughed.

Mimi woke up beside me.

She curiously looked around.

MeiLing, what’s so funny?

 

Mimi stretched her body long.

Then she jumped up on my thigh.

“Are you my best friend, Mimi?”

She licked my palm as a reply.

 

I don’t often miss China

And cry like I did before.

I have a good friend, Mimi.

I don’t feel lonely anymore.

 

I began to like Canada.

I still like China very much too.

I have two homes, one in China,

One in Canada, it’s true!

 

At this very moment,

Mimi woke up from a nap.

I was writing this story,

With Mimi on my lap.

 

Thanks for reading mystory. 

Youare my dearest friend,

Typed by Mimi with myhelp. 

­­­­~The End~


ESL: English as a Second Language.

The course is for non-native English speakers.

 

我爱我的小猫!(第五章)

5 世界真奇妙!

我感谢生活给了我

一只多么可爱的小猫。

每晚咪咪和我一床睡觉。

她打呼噜但不吵。

 

今天的一大早,

我醒来睁开眼睛一瞧,

我可爱的小猫在哪呢?

一个惊喜,她给我送到。

 

她在一堆毛绒玩具,

狗,猫和我心爱的熊猫之中。

她假装也是一个玩具,

一丝毫毛都不动。

 

她漂亮的眼睛象圆圆的弹子球,

总是闪烁著光芒。

她的眼睛是金黄色的,

但眼珠是黑的,和我的一样。

 

当她思考问题,

她不叫也不眨眼。

她能长时间盯看一个地方,

让我刮目相看!

 

每次我和咪咪进行不眨眼比赛,

为好玩儿、为热闹,

我的眼睛睁得又圆又大,

可咪咪每次都赢,我好不懊恼!

 

在我们小区的所有猫里,

咪咪最为聪明。

每当我给她发布命令,

她总是立即反应。

 

我的小猫咪咪懂我。

她的心事,我也知道。

你若问我们是怎样知道的?

我也说不大好。

 

我们小孩和宠物之间,

当然相知相晓。

就象人们了解他们的

兄弟姐妹那样的好。

 

我们小孩从不把宠物

简单地看成小狗小猫。

我们是兄弟姐妹,

彼此之间不分谁大谁小。

 

我是好奇的小孩。

我最爱东看看西瞧瞧。

我有很多新发现!

这个世界真奇妙!

 

爸爸、妈妈和我正在喝茶。

咪咪躺在我的身边睡觉。

我告诉父母我的新发现,

我有几分自豪。

 

“中国人和加拿大人

长的不同,你们都知道。”

我喝了口绿茶。

“但是我们的猫长的一个相貌。”

 

爸爸笑着说,

“他们都说同样的语言,喵喵喵。”

“他们不象我要学ESL课程,”

妈妈象个害羞的孩子似地说道。

 

爸爸和我一起哈哈大笑。

吵醒了咪咪的小觉。

她好奇地四处看看,

美灵,什么事这么好笑?

 

咪咪伸了个长长的懒腰。 

她跳上我的腿让我抱。

“你是我最好的朋友吗,咪咪?”

她在我的手心里一舔。她答的妙。

 

我不再象从前那样,

老想念中国把眼泪掉。

我有一个好朋友,咪咪。

我不再孤独烦恼。

 

我仍然非常喜欢中国。

我开始喜欢上加拿大。

我的家在中国也在加拿大,

真的,我有两个家!

 

此刻,咪咪在我腿上,

刚刚睡醒了她的午觉。

我在写这个故事

《我爱我的小猫!》。

 

我最亲爱的朋友,

感谢你将我的故事读了一遍。

这句话是咪咪在我帮助下敲的。

~ ~

 

ESL:为英语是第二语言的学生所设立的课程


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