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【绿队】 乡愁吟

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七律     乡愁吟     (平水韵十三元 

 

晴云岸柳拂乾坤,我纵心潮与浪奔。  

  

风入莲池绿生影,月凉竹翠晓望村  

  

欲探娘亲不能行,凭眺故乡何所言  

  

诗酒天山愁作赋,长歌大饮莫辞樽 

 

 

原帖     https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/243744.html?

 

 

附:天山兄的主贴原文 

 

A few days ago, Yingying wrote several poems to express the feelings of her missing to her hometown and relatives, especially the Seven-character poetry [Missing relatives during the festival] which she wrote on the Dragon Boat Festival . I feel the same way. I really like this poem. Now I  sing it with the tune of Chen Rui’s song [ Yellow Crane Tower] 。 I also followed her and wrote a Seven-character poetry when I stood on the beach of  the Lake of Ontario on the Canada Day (July 1, 2021) as following: 

 

 

七律  佳节思亲   (平水韵十三元

 

晴云岸柳拂乾坤,我纵心潮与浪奔 


昨梦依稀飞故里,朝来前后是多村

 
半生行旅伤离绪,几度晨曦照泪痕

 
何日疫情休反复,归游探母慰亲恩 

 

 

 

乡愁(1972年余光中所著的诗歌)—搜狗百科

 

 

 

 

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