蝉音了了
诗歌和蝉鸣
博文
(2023-12-19 15:47:09)
饥饿的鸟
饥饿的鸟
盯着瞪着双眼的稻草人祈祷
他会去吃饭
他会去睡觉
他会遇到美丽的姑娘
被爱情拥抱
他会有和鸟儿一样的生命
一样的欢笑
饥饿的鸟
盯着圆圆的月亮祈祷
gpt点评
这首诗表达了一种对生命、幸福和美好的渴望，以及对未来的信仰和期待。以下是对这首诗的评价：
意境描绘：诗中通过描绘一只饥饿的鸟盯着稻草人祈祷，[阅读全文]
(2023-12-08 15:26:15)
4年前写的
Nighttrain
Itdrizzlesatmidnightinspring
Raindropstap,tap
awakenthedozingnighttrain
Theagedandworngreencarswobble
thewanderingwoodenbenches
andmyfewthreadsofsilverhairs
thatroamandblurindimlight Onestopafteranother
surgeonbandsofteens
Ilookforscarlet
inthecrowd
forthefirstspreadofscarletonyourlips
inmymemory Dreamafterdream
...[阅读全文]
Itdrizzlesatmidnightinspring
Raindropstap,tap
awakenthedozingnighttrain
Theagedandworngreencarswobble
thewanderingwoodenbenches
andmyfewthreadsofsilverhairs
thatroamandblurindimlight Onestopafteranother
surgeonbandsofteens
Ilookforscarlet
inthecrowd
forthefirstspreadofscarletonyourlips
inmymemory Dreamafterdream
...[阅读全文]
(2023-12-07 10:40:21)
闲聊回家怎么扣题【皇帝】是个难题，好在带着岳母来美国，她的经历能牵强地联系上。
岳母85岁，中过风，换过髋关节，所以要求了轮椅服务。从机场进入候机楼大门的一刻起就有小伙子推着轮椅过来全程护送，直到飞机舱门。小伙子非常专业，标准微笑服务。发生一个小插曲，最终虚惊一场。在办理登机牌时才知道登上赴美航班前必须在evus.gov登记，而且每两年更新一次[阅读全文]
(2023-12-07 10:38:14)
Raindropsinthesun
Raindropsinthesun
oryourtears
softensunlight
Bouncyondaisies
andstirupdreamingbutterflies GPT Thepoem"RaindropsintheSun"isabriefyetevocativepiecethatcapturestheessenceofraindropsinasunlitenvironment.Hereisananalysisofthepoem: Title:Thetitlesetsthesceneforthepoem,suggestingacombinationofrainandsunlight,whichcreatesacontrastbetweenthetypic...[阅读全文]
Raindropsinthesun
oryourtears
softensunlight
Bouncyondaisies
andstirupdreamingbutterflies GPT Thepoem"RaindropsintheSun"isabriefyetevocativepiecethatcapturestheessenceofraindropsinasunlitenvironment.Hereisananalysisofthepoem: Title:Thetitlesetsthesceneforthepoem,suggestingacombinationofrainandsunlight,whichcreatesacontrastbetweenthetypic...[阅读全文]
(2023-12-06 19:48:32)
Tastemintwhenkissedbymoonlight
Tastemintwhenkissedbymoonlight
andgazeatyouonastarlessnight
Warmedbyfireflies
anddreaminyourwordlesslullabies GPT Thepoemisconciseandevocative,capturingasensoryandromanticexperience.Here'sabreakdown: SensoryImagery: Tastemintwhenkissedbymoonlight:Theuseoftasteandmoonlightsuggestsauniqueandrefreshingexperience.It'snotaliteraltas...[阅读全文]
Tastemintwhenkissedbymoonlight
andgazeatyouonastarlessnight
Warmedbyfireflies
anddreaminyourwordlesslullabies GPT Thepoemisconciseandevocative,capturingasensoryandromanticexperience.Here'sabreakdown: SensoryImagery: Tastemintwhenkissedbymoonlight:Theuseoftasteandmoonlightsuggestsauniqueandrefreshingexperience.It'snotaliteraltas...[阅读全文]
(2023-11-19 03:02:26)
太阳雨
太阳雨
你的眼泪
滴落在雏菊
惊起梦蝶纷飞
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(2023-11-15 10:28:24)
TheSoundofYourShadow
Thesoundofyourshadow
waves
inthemoonlightthat'sshallow
Upward,itconcaves
andfillsmyheartthat'shollow GPT "TheSoundofYourShadow"isabriefyetevocativepoemthatcapturesasenseoflongingandemotionaldepth.Let'sbreakdownitskeyelements: Title: "TheSoundofYourShadow":Thetitleimmediatelysetsacontemplativeandperhapsmelancho...[阅读全文]
Thesoundofyourshadow
waves
inthemoonlightthat'sshallow
Upward,itconcaves
andfillsmyheartthat'shollow GPT "TheSoundofYourShadow"isabriefyetevocativepoemthatcapturesasenseoflongingandemotionaldepth.Let'sbreakdownitskeyelements: Title: "TheSoundofYourShadow":Thetitleimmediatelysetsacontemplativeandperhapsmelancho...[阅读全文]
(2023-11-14 16:27:03)
TheShadowofYourSound
Theshadowofyoursound
gray
paintspeacearound
theheartshapedhay GPT "TheShadowofYourSound"isaconciseandevocativepoemthatcapturesamoodthroughitsimageryandsimplicity.Let'sbreakdowntheanalysis: Title: Thetitle,"TheShadowofYourSound,"suggestsaconnectionbetweensoundanditsvisualcounterpart,theshadow.Thisimmediatelysetsupametaphor...[阅读全文]
Theshadowofyoursound
gray
paintspeacearound
theheartshapedhay GPT "TheShadowofYourSound"isaconciseandevocativepoemthatcapturesamoodthroughitsimageryandsimplicity.Let'sbreakdowntheanalysis: Title: Thetitle,"TheShadowofYourSound,"suggestsaconnectionbetweensoundanditsvisualcounterpart,theshadow.Thisimmediatelysetsupametaphor...[阅读全文]
(2023-11-14 10:37:57)
因为工作和生活，旧金山，圣地亚哥，西雅图，波特兰这4个城市从2000年开始就每两三年去一次，第一次去的时候非常喜欢，那时在美帝的大城市里，这里的市中心是少有的好玩安全的，然后就眼看着越来越糟，觉得很痛心的一件事。最近一次在圣地亚哥时，还差点踩上金灿灿的地雷。当然地雷和针头比起来是小菜。今年8月份去优胜美地，还带着二宝campustour，精心选择路线，[阅读全文]
(2023-11-13 13:02:52)
Sunlightbrightensyou
Sunlightbrightensyou
anddarkensyourshadow
Tome,it'stheonlythingtrue
thatwarmsmyfingersandtomorrow GPT Thisshortpoemreflectsasimpleyetprofoundcontemplationonsunlightanditsimpactonthespeaker'sperceptionandemotions.Let'sbreakdowntheanalysis: Repetition:Therepetitionoftheline"Sunlightbrightensyou"emphasizesthesignificanceofsun...[阅读全文]
Sunlightbrightensyou
anddarkensyourshadow
Tome,it'stheonlythingtrue
thatwarmsmyfingersandtomorrow GPT Thisshortpoemreflectsasimpleyetprofoundcontemplationonsunlightanditsimpactonthespeaker'sperceptionandemotions.Let'sbreakdowntheanalysis: Repetition:Therepetitionoftheline"Sunlightbrightensyou"emphasizesthesignificanceofsun...[阅读全文]
